List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to organize your answer clearly by starting with a direct response, then explain your reasons using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas logically.

예시: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I buy whatever I want if it's not my money. However, if I am spending my own money, I prefer to make a list to avoid wasting money.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly. Use correct vocabulary ('list' instead of 'last' or 'lash') and linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

예시: I don't have a job yet, but I make lists when I study. This helps me stay motivated because I can check off tasks when I finish them and feel accomplished.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words like 'first' and 'second' to organize your points. Avoid unclear or repetitive phrases.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because, first, they are very organized and know what to do without a list. Second, some people have no tasks to do, so they don't need a list.

제안: Give a clear and direct answer first. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain your reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unclear phrases and keep sentences concise.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me feel more organized. I have used paper lists since I was young, and I find them more comfortable than using my phone.

× Actually, we have girls we don't do last.

✓ Actually, we have girls; we don't make lists.

The word 'last' is incorrect here; it should be 'list'. Also, 'girls' is plural and correct, but the sentence structure is unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and fixes the plural noun usage.

× We just go and do shopping in whatever you want to buy, you gonna buy if it's not your money.

✓ We just go shopping and buy whatever you want if it's not your money.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' or omitted for clarity.

× Of course, if it's if it's my money, I would do a lost.

✓ Of course, if it's my money, I would make a list.

The modal verb 'would' is correctly used for hypothetical situations, but 'do a lost' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'.

× Of course, I would rather to do a last not because not because to waste my money other one I waste my money anymore.

✓ Of course, I would rather make a list, not because I want to waste my money or anything like that.

The phrase 'would rather to do' is incorrect; 'would rather' should be followed by the base verb without 'to'. Also, 'last' should be 'list'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× OK, I will talk about the studying 'cause I'm not working yet.

✓ OK, I will talk about studying because I'm not working yet.

The word 'studying' is an uncountable noun here and does not need 'the'. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'.

× So yeah, while studying I need to do a last to motivate myself to finish and also to motivate myself when I finish something, I just lash on it that I did it and go to whatever it after.

✓ So yeah, while studying I need to make a list to motivate myself to finish, and also to motivate myself when I finish something, I just check it off and go to whatever is next.

'Do a last' should be 'make a list'. 'Lash on it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'check it off'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct verb usage.

× So I love doing this while I'm working, which is studying.

✓ So I love doing this while I'm working, which means studying.

The sentence is mostly correct; adding 'means' clarifies the meaning.

× In my opinion, people that don't like making blessed is one of the options is that they very smart that they know what they need to do in their day.

✓ In my opinion, one reason people don't like making lists is that they are very smart and know what they need to do in their day.

'Making blessed' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. The sentence structure is corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× At the second is that they don't have anything to do in day, so don't they don't need a last to do so don't do any last.

✓ The second reason is that they don't have anything to do in the day, so they don't need a list to do and therefore don't make any list.

'At the second' should be 'The second reason'. 'In day' should be 'in the day'. 'A last' should be 'a list'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct article usage.

× No I prefer to do everything on paper.

✓ No, I prefer to do everything on paper.

A comma is added after 'No' for correct punctuation; no modal verb error here.

× Paper makes me feel more organized and I always been using paper sense they want in my life.

✓ Paper makes me feel more organized, and I have always been using paper since they were in my life.

'Always been using' requires the present perfect tense 'have always been using'. 'Sense' should be 'since'. 'They want in my life' is unclear; corrected to 'they were in my life'.

× So I love paper and it makes me comfort more and make me see whatever I want to do right now is take it in the wall.

✓ So I love paper, and it makes me more comfortable and helps me see whatever I want to do right now; I just put it on the wall.

'Makes me comfort more' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me more comfortable'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct verb usage.