List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь формулировать предложения более связно и использовать правильные времена. Также избегайте повторений и старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember everything I need. However, sometimes I write a list if I have many items to buy.

제안: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также связующие слова для улучшения связности речи.

예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work because there is a lot of information to remember, and writing it down helps me stay organized.

제안: Ваш ответ не соответствует вопросу, так как вы говорите о том, почему люди любят делать списки, а не почему не любят. Также присутствуют грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь внимательно слушать вопрос и отвечать по существу.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много разрывов в предложениях. Рекомендуется строить полные предложения и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также уточните предпочтение между бумагой и телефоном.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient than writing on paper.

× I think it is not important for me becauses.

✓ I think it is not important for me because.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because' without an 's'. This is a common mistake where the plural form is incorrectly used for conjunctions. Use 'because' to introduce a reason.

× I had.

✓ I have.

The sentence 'I had.' is incomplete and uses past tense incorrectly here. The speaker likely means to say 'I have' to indicate possession of information currently. The sentence needs a verb and object to be complete.

× All of information, what I should buy in my head, in my brand, and I think it is not important for person for me.

✓ All the information about what I should buy is in my head, in my mind, and I think it is not important for me to make a list.

The phrase 'All of information' is incorrect; it should be 'All the information'. 'What I should buy' needs to be connected properly. 'In my brand' is likely a mishearing or misuse; 'in my mind' is correct. 'Not important for person for me' is incorrect; it should be 'not important for me'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Definitely yes, In my work it is very necessary to writing down at least because very important becauses in my work existing a lot of different information and I can't keep it in my mind, in my brain.

✓ Definitely yes. In my work, it is very necessary to write things down at least because there is a lot of different information, and I can't keep it all in my mind.

The phrase 'to writing down' is incorrect; after 'necessary to' the base form 'write' should be used. 'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'In my work existing a lot of different information' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a lot of different information'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct modal verb usage.

× In my opinion. I think people loves to making list becaused it ensures to. Don't forget the necessary and important information at work and in the free time.

✓ In my opinion, I think people love making lists because it helps them not to forget necessary and important information at work and in their free time.

'People loves' is incorrect; 'people' is plural so the verb should be 'love'. 'To making list' should be 'making lists' without 'to'. 'Becaused' is incorrect; use 'because'. 'It ensures to. Don't forget' is awkward; better to say 'it helps them not to forget'. 'In the free time' should be 'in their free time' for correct pronoun use.

× In my opinion, writing and necessary and important information. At work or at lessons, better informed because you're. Can write much faster. And. Much more convenient and convertible.

✓ In my opinion, writing down necessary and important information at work or during lessons is better because you can write much faster, and it is much more convenient and comfortable.

The sentence fragments are corrected into a complete sentence. 'Writing and necessary and important information' is incorrect; it should be 'writing down necessary and important information'. 'At lessons' is better as 'during lessons'. 'You're. Can write' is fragmented; combined into 'you can write'. 'Convertible' is incorrect in this context; 'comfortable' or 'convenient' is appropriate.