List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tu respuesta no es clara ni natural. Debes usar oraciones completas y evitar errores gramaticales para que tu respuesta sea más efectiva y coherente. Además, intenta ser más específico sobre por qué haces listas al comprar.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Tu respuesta es inapropiada y poco clara. Debes responder directamente a la pregunta con respeto y explicar tu opinión de manera clara y educada. Evita usar lenguaje ofensivo o confuso.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list for work because I prefer to focus on tasks as they come, but sometimes making a list can help prioritize important duties.

제안: Tu respuesta es confusa y contiene errores gramaticales. Debes estructurar mejor tus ideas y usar conectores para que la respuesta sea coherente. Además, intenta dar razones claras y específicas.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally, but others use lists to stay organized and avoid forgetting tasks.

제안: Tu respuesta es demasiado corta y no explica tu preferencia. Debes desarrollar tu respuesta con detalles y usar oraciones completas para que sea más natural y efectiva.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them, but sometimes I use paper if I want to write quickly.

× Yes, it's imperative for me always half all these when I want, when I'm going to shop, because it's. Very important right to organize everything in your life.

✓ Yes, it's always imperative for me to have all these when I want to go shopping because it's very important to organize everything in your life.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. 'Always' should come before 'imperative' to modify it correctly. 'Half' is likely a typo for 'have'. The phrase 'when I want, when I'm going to shop' is redundant and awkward; it should be 'when I want to go shopping'. Also, 'right' is unnecessary and 'to organize' needs the preposition 'to' before the verb. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× What the ****? Home who make a list for working it's it's stupid manager or June only need to go there and you do your work it's. It's not important to make a lace or stuff like that.

✓ Who makes a list for work at home? It's stupid. Managers or juniors only need to go there and do their work. It's not important to make a list or stuff like that.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun usage and grammatical errors. 'Home who make a list for working' is unclear; it should be 'Who makes a list for work at home?'. 'It's stupid manager or June' is confusing; likely meant 'It's stupid. Managers or juniors...'. Also, 'you do your work it's' is incorrect; it should be 'do their work'. 'Make a lace' is a typo for 'make a list'. Correcting pronouns and sentence structure clarifies meaning.

× There are so many reasons do people make list. I don't know I could names I can name a few but maybe it to be more organized with their life. Maybe because the TE tend to forgot. Things I don't know. There are a bunch of motive.

✓ There are so many reasons why people make lists. I don't know, I can name a few, but maybe it's to be more organized in their life. Maybe because they tend to forget things. I don't know. There are a bunch of motives.

The original sentences have multiple sentence structure errors: missing conjunctions ('why' after 'reasons'), incorrect verb forms ('do people make list' should be 'people make lists'), missing commas, incorrect pronouns ('it' instead of 'it's'), and typos ('TE' instead of 'they', 'forgot' instead of 'forget', 'motive' instead of 'motives'). Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Either 2.

✓ Either one of the two.

The phrase 'Either 2' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Either' should be followed by 'one of' and the number should be spelled out or clarified. The corrected sentence 'Either one of the two' properly expresses the choice between two options.