List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list when I go grocery shopping because it helps me stay organised and shop more efficiently. For example, it prevents me from forgetting important items.

제안: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and ensure clarity.

예시: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks. For instance, I use a to-do list to ensure I don't miss any meetings with my manager, which makes my work more convenient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I think some people find making lists complicated and time-consuming, so they prefer not to use them. Also, certain jobs might not require strict organisation, making lists less useful.

제안: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I don't always carry paper and a pen. Since I always have my phone with me, it's more convenient to keep my lists there.

× Yes, I always prepare his shopping this for my grocery shopping because they will more organized and more efficiency and I can shut the pies as well.

✓ Yes, I always prepare this shopping list for my grocery shopping because it will be more organised and more efficient and I can shop the items as well.

The pronouns 'his' and 'they' are incorrectly used here. 'His' should be 'this' to refer to the shopping list, and 'they' should be 'it' to refer to the singular 'shopping list'. Also, 'more efficiency' should be 'more efficient' to correctly use the adjective form.

× So I prefer to use the shopping list to shopping.

✓ So I prefer to use the shopping list when shopping.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used here. The correct phrase is 'when shopping' to indicate the activity during which the list is used.

× Yes, I love to create a this for my work.

✓ Yes, I love to create this for my work.

The phrase 'a this' is incorrect because 'this' is a demonstrative pronoun and does not need an article 'a' before it.

× For example it to do this so I will not miss any meeting with manager.

✓ For example, a to-do list so I will not miss any meeting with my manager.

The phrase 'it to do this' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'a to-do list'. Also, 'with manager' needs the possessive pronoun 'my'.

× So it's quite convenience for my work.

✓ So it's quite convenient for my work.

'Convenience' is a noun, but here an adjective 'convenient' is needed to describe the situation.

× I think they think the to do this is more complicated and waste the time so they don't prefer to use the knees and some jobs may not be able to use the nice through organized.

✓ I think they think the to-do list is more complicated and wastes time, so they don't prefer to use it and some jobs may not be able to use the list to stay organised.

Several pronouns and words are misused or misspelled: 'the to do this' should be 'the to-do list'; 'waste the time' should be 'wastes time'; 'the knees' and 'the nice through' are incorrect and should be 'it' and 'the list'; 'organized' should be 'organised' in British English.

× I prefer to use to this by the phone because I'm not always worth with the paper and a pen so my phone will be always keep it to me so I prefer used the phone.

✓ I prefer to use this on my phone because I'm not always working with paper and a pen, so my phone is always with me, so I prefer to use the phone.

The prepositions 'to this by the phone' and 'worth with the paper' are incorrect. The correct phrases are 'use this on my phone' and 'working with paper'. Also, 'will be always keep it to me' is incorrect; it should be 'is always with me'. Finally, 'prefer used' should be 'prefer to use'.