List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、自然な英語表現に改善が必要です。例えば、"when you when I shop"は不自然で、"when I shop"で十分です。また、"What I have to buy or what I should buy?"は疑問文の形が不適切なので、"to remember what I have to buy"のように表現すると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop to remember what I need to buy because I am not good at memorizing things.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、文法や単語の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"diss"はおそらく"list"の誤りであり、"walk"は"work"の誤りと思われます。文を簡潔にし、正しい単語を使い、意味が明確になるようにしましょう。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me know exactly what tasks I need to complete, so I can work efficiently.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接答え、理由を明確に述べる必要があります。例えば、"Some people may find making lists boring or restrictive"のように表現すると良いでしょう。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel it limits their freedom to decide what to do next.

제안: 回答に文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"card list"や"make a diss"は誤りで、"make a list"が正しいです。理由を明確にし、文をつなげて自然な英語にしましょう。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so I am less likely to forget the list compared to paper.

× Yes, I make a list when you when I shop, not to forget.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop, so I don't forget.

The original sentence has a confusing phrase 'when you when I shop' which is incorrect. The subject 'I' should be consistent, and the phrase 'not to forget' is better expressed as 'so I don't forget' to clarify the purpose of making a list.

× What I have to buy or what I should buy?

✓ What I have to buy or what I should buy.

This is a fragment and not a complete sentence. It should be part of a larger sentence or rephrased as a question: 'What do I have to buy or what should I buy?'. However, since it is part of a statement, removing the question mark and making it a statement is better.

× Yes, I always make a diss when I walk because it is clear what I have to do so I can. I can do. Wag Affectivity.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I work because it is clear what I have to do, so I can do it effectively.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'diss' should be 'list', 'walk' should be 'work', and 'Wag Affectivity' is nonsensical. The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting these errors and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× It's difficult question for me because I always make a list, but I think some people don't feel. Don't want to few imitation. Sometimes a disk.

✓ It's a difficult question for me because I always make a list, but I think some people don't feel the need. They don't want to do it. Sometimes a list.

The original sentence has pronoun errors and unclear phrases: 'don't feel' is incomplete, 'few imitation' is incorrect, and 'Sometimes a disk' is likely a mishearing of 'Sometimes a list'. Correcting pronouns and clarifying the meaning improves the sentence.

× I prefer my card list on my phone because. I always come. I always have my phone and. I don't forget my phone if I make a diss on the paper. I may forget.

✓ I prefer my card list on my phone because I always carry my phone, and I don't forget it. If I make a list on paper, I may forget it.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and fragmented sentences. 'I always come' is unclear and should be 'I always carry my phone'. 'Make a diss' should be 'make a list'. Correcting prepositions and sentence structure improves clarity.