List— Part 1 채점 보고서

× Yes I I can make most wanna shop because it makes me easy to check whether I have elected the thing or not and also it acts as a yardstick to compare my shopping.

✓ Yes, I can make most wanted shopping lists because it makes it easy for me to check whether I have selected the items or not, and also it acts as a yardstick to compare my shopping.

The phrase 'most wanna shop' is incorrect; it should be 'most wanted shopping lists' or similar. 'Makes me easy' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easy for me'. 'Elected the thing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'selected the items'. The sentence also needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I do usually make this for my work and it also helps me in many ways light.

✓ Yes, I usually make this for my work and it also helps me in many ways.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'make'. The word 'light' at the end is incorrect and unnecessary, so it has been removed for clarity.

× Because everything is already in it and in the list and I can check anytime that's better as completed the work or not.

✓ Because everything is already in the list, I can check anytime whether I have completed the work or not.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'That's better as completed the work or not' is incorrect. The corrected sentence combines the ideas properly and uses 'whether' to introduce the condition.

× Some people may don't like making less becaused they might take that it is time consuming and they can retain all the information in their mind.

✓ Some people may not like making lists because they think it is time-consuming and they can retain all the information in their mind.

'May don't' is incorrect; it should be 'may not'. 'Making less' is a typo for 'making lists'. 'Becaused' should be 'because'. 'Might take that' is incorrect; it should be 'think that'. Hyphenation is needed in 'time-consuming'.

× But for some people who have memory problems. Makes their list to make their task easy.

✓ But for some people who have memory problems, making a list makes their task easier.

The original sentences are fragmented. 'Makes their list to make their task easy' is incorrect. The corrected sentence combines the ideas properly and uses gerund 'making' as the subject.

× Usually I prefer to make list on my phone because it is less time consuming than writing yourself by pen on a paper and it is also very mobile and I can see check anytime weather as formulated the work or not and go through my list anytime of the day that I want.

✓ Usually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is less time-consuming than writing by pen on paper, and it is also very mobile. I can check anytime whether I have completed the work or not and go through my list anytime I want.

'Make list' needs an article 'a list'. 'Writing yourself by pen on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'writing by pen on paper'. 'Weather as formulated the work or not' is incorrect; it should be 'whether I have completed the work or not'. The sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. 'Anytime of the day that I want' is simplified to 'anytime I want'.