List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the market because it helps me remember all the necessary items. For instance, since I have a family to take care of, making a list prevents me from buying unnecessary things. Moreover, it saves time as I can shop quickly without forgetting anything.

제안: Your answer has some good points but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement for clarity and coherence. Use linking words like 'so' and 'therefore' to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you manage your work.

예시: Yes, I prepare a to-do list every morning. This helps me identify the most important tasks I need to complete that day. Therefore, I can manage my time effectively and ensure that I finish all necessary work on time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'since'. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

예시: People have different preferences when it comes to making lists. Some do not like making lists because they believe they have a good memory and can remember their tasks easily. Since they trust their memory, they feel making a list is unnecessary and time-consuming.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Please respond directly to the question with a clear preference and reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about how making lists on paper helps you.

예시: I prefer to make my lists on paper because it is easier for me to write and review them anytime. Also, I can tick off completed tasks, which gives me a sense of achievement and motivates me to finish more.

× I always have a veteran with the old for going shopping.

✓ I always have a list with me for going shopping.

The original sentence uses 'veteran' and 'the old' incorrectly. The intended meaning is likely 'list'. The error is a singular/plural and word choice issue. Correcting to 'a list' makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× After that I can memorize my necessary items.

✓ After that, I can remember my necessary items.

The verb 'memorize' is incorrectly used here; 'remember' is more appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after 'After that' for clarity. The preposition 'after' is correct, but the verb choice is wrong.

× Especially I have a daughter of a 40 year old.

✓ Especially, I have a 40-year-old daughter.

The phrase 'a daughter of a 40 year old' is incorrect. The correct form is 'a 40-year-old daughter' where '40-year-old' is a compound adjective describing 'daughter'. Also, hyphens are needed in '40-year-old'.

× So it's really important to me, a girl or a list of horror and my family and it'll help me to prevent to buy unnecessary items.

✓ So it's really important to me, as a girl and for my family, and it helps me to avoid buying unnecessary items.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The phrase 'a girl or a list of horror' is unclear and likely incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and fixes sentence structure errors.

× And it is like a it, it is like a time consuming as well.

✓ And it is like a time-consuming task as well.

The phrase 'like a it' is incorrect and redundant. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Is I always prepare it To Do List are every morning, it will be easy for me to understand what is the important work and what is the building works for me to complete on that particular day and so that I can manage my time and also it help me to prepare myself to complete all the necessary task.

✓ I always prepare a To-Do List every morning. It makes it easy for me to understand which work is important and which tasks I need to complete on that particular day. This way, I can manage my time and it also helps me prepare to complete all the necessary tasks.

The original sentence has multiple grammatical errors including sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Breaking it into multiple sentences improves clarity and correctness.

× Each of them have different preferences.

✓ Each of them has different preferences.

'Each' is singular and should be followed by 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× For me, I like to prepare at the list, but some of them are like you're not preparing lists or the others say or because they are saying that they already have a memory power and they all because of that, they know that what are the task they had to complete so they don't need to spend a time for preparing the list.

✓ For me, I like to prepare a list, but some of them don't prepare lists. Others say that they already have good memory power, so they know what tasks they have to complete and don't need to spend time preparing a list.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun usage ('you're' instead of 'they don't'), awkward phrasing, and redundancy. The correction fixes pronouns and improves sentence clarity.

× Are you always prefer to make a list on paper?

✓ I always prefer to make a list on paper.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Are you' which is a question form, but the intended meaning is a statement. Also, 'on paper' is correct preposition usage here.

× That is the easy way for me so that I can arrive whenever I'm writing that one and that is that will help me to memorize that that what are my pending tasks and after completing their task, I will always put a tick mark with that one.

✓ That is the easy way for me so that I can refer to it whenever I'm writing. It helps me memorize my pending tasks, and after completing each task, I always put a tick mark next to it.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Arrive' is incorrectly used instead of 'refer to'. The correction clarifies meaning and fixes sentence structure.

× After seeing that Warner, I will be like a more happy why how completed that much of stars.

✓ After seeing that, I feel happier because I have completed many tasks.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns ('Warner'), awkward phrasing, and unclear meaning. The correction uses appropriate pronouns and clearer expression.