List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“Are usually don't make”应为“I usually don't make”。建议注意主语和助动词的搭配，保持句子结构完整且自然。

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time, so it's easier for me to remember what I need.

제안: 回答较简短，建议增加连接词和具体细节，使表达更连贯自然。例如说明制作清单的具体好处。

예시: Yes, I make a To-Do List at work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently and ensures I don't forget any important duties.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议使用连接词如“because”、“so”来使句子更流畅。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time, and they feel confident in their memory, so they prefer to start working immediately.

제안: 回答自然且内容具体，但可以稍微丰富细节，增加一些对比，使表达更生动。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing, and it helps me remember better compared to typing on my phone, which can be distracting.

× Are usually don't make shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time, so it's easier for me to remember what I need.

✓ I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time, so it's easier for me to remember what I need.

句子中“Are usually don't make”结构不正确，应该使用“I usually don't make”，即主语加副词的正确顺序。这里是一般现在时态，表示习惯动作。

× Are usually don't make shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time, so it's easier for me to remember what I need.

✓ I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time, so it's easier for me to remember what I need.

“shopping list”前缺少冠词“a”，因为这里指的是一个不特定的购物清单，英语中单数可数名词前需要冠词。

× Yes, I make To Do List in the work and I feel it can help me remember all the important things.

✓ Yes, I make a To Do List at work and I feel it can help me remember all the important things.

“To Do List”前缺少冠词“a”，且“in the work”应改为“at work”，因为“work”作为地点时用介词“at”。

× Yes, I make To Do List in the work and I feel it can help me remember all the important things.

✓ Yes, I make a To Do List at work and I feel it can help me remember all the important things.

介词“in the work”用法错误，表示工作地点时应使用“at work”。

× Some individuals perceive list making as time consuming and they feel confident in their ability to remember all the things and they prefer to use the time to dive straightly into their work.

✓ Some individuals perceive list making as time-consuming and they feel confident in their ability to remember all the things and they prefer to use the time to dive straight into their work.

“time consuming”应连写为复合形容词“time-consuming”，修饰名词。副词“straightly”用法错误，应使用“straight”表示“直接地”。

× Some individuals perceive list making as time consuming and they feel confident in their ability to remember all the things and they prefer to use the time to dive straightly into their work.

✓ Some individuals perceive list making as time-consuming and they feel confident in their ability to remember everything and they prefer to use the time to dive straight into their work.

“all the things”用法不自然，改为“everything”更符合英语习惯，表示“所有事情”。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the tactile feelings of writing things down, and I feel it's easier for me to remember things when I write them by hand.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down, and I feel it's easier for me to remember things when I write them by hand.

“tactile feelings”应为不可数名词“tactile feeling”，表示触觉感受，复数形式不合适。