List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas effectively.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and manage my budget efficiently.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I make a list whenever it helps me to complete my work properly and maintain efficiency with my colleagues.

제안: Your answer is understandable but informal and slightly grammatically incorrect. Use full forms and correct prepositions to sound more natural and formal.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember what to buy without writing it down.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy by combining sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it is easier to use, especially when my phone is unavailable or has a low battery.

× Yes, I make a list of any shop because it help me to remember the things and prepare the budgeted.

✓ Yes, I make a list of any shop because it helps me to remember the things and prepare the budget.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'budgeted' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'budget'.

× Yes, I make a list whenever could help me to do my work properly and maintain a. My worker with effeciently and effectively.

✓ Yes, I make a list whenever it could help me to do my work properly and maintain my work efficiently and effectively.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'could help'. Also, 'worker' is incorrect; the intended word is 'work'. 'Effeciently' is misspelled and should be 'efficiently'.

× 'Cause they are good in the memorizing things. They know how to buy things without a list too.

✓ 'Cause they are good at memorizing things. They know how to buy things without a list too.

The correct preposition after 'good' when followed by a gerund is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'the' before 'memorizing things' is unnecessary.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because if it is easy to buy things.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easy to buy things.

The phrase 'because if it is easy' is incorrect; 'if' should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× When we maintain a list on paper, sometimes phones are not available and are sometimes it can be low power, low battery.

✓ When we maintain a list on paper, sometimes phones are not available and sometimes they can have low power or low battery.

The sentence has incorrect word order and redundant words. 'Are sometimes it can be' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes they can have'. Also, 'low power, low battery' should be connected properly.