Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答题要直接明了，避免重复与语填充词（如 uh, I think）。开头用一句主题句表明观点，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。可以把“bathroom singer”更自然地表达为“sing in the bathroom”。总句数不超过5句，注意时态与语法（e.g. 'I'm a big-time bathroom singer' 或 'I often sing in the bathroom'）。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing. I often sing in the bathroom because the acoustics make my voice sound better, and it helps me feel more energetic and relaxed. Singing puts me in a good mood, so I do it whenever I need a boost.

제안: 回答要更清晰地表达是否接受过正式训练。避免语法错误（如 'I don't learn how to think'），用简单句子说明经历和程度，补充具体时间或内容（例如在校音乐课学过基本唱法）。用连接词如 'however' 或 'but' 来衔接对比。

예시: I haven't had any formal singing lessons. However, I took music classes throughout primary and secondary school where we learned basic singing techniques, so my training was informal rather than professional.

제안: 先给出直接答案，然后用一两句具体说明场景和原因。避免冗长重复与语法错误（例如 'I don't want to singing' 应为 'I don't want to sing for anyone in particular'）。使用连接词如 'but' 或 'so' 使句子连贯。

예시: I usually sing for myself rather than for a specific person. However, when I'm with friends or at a party, I often sing to entertain them and boost the atmosphere, because I enjoy creating a positive vibe.

제안: 回答要逻辑清楚，减少填充词，使用具体例子或机制说明影响（例如通过表达情感或增强社交联系）。保持句子简洁并用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 解释原因，注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because it expresses positive emotions and helps others feel connected. When someone sings with enthusiasm, it shows they are enjoying the moment, which often lifts the mood of everyone around them.

제안: 先直接回答，然后用具体例子说明（如父亲在家经常唱歌），避免重复句意。可以补充场景或感受，使用更自然的表达（例如 'my father often sings at home'）。控制句子数量并注意连贯性。

예시: Yes, I do. My father often sings at home, and I enjoy listening to him because his singing lifts my spirits. Hearing others sing can create a warm, positive atmosphere and improve my mood.

제안: 回答要明确是有或没有正式课程，描述课程内容和专业程度时用准确句式（如 'we had music classes that taught basic singing and listening skills'）。删除无意义填充词并保持句子简洁，最多5句。

예시: Yes, I had music classes in primary, middle and high school where we learned basic singing and listening skills. These classes gave me some fundamental knowledge, but they weren't professional vocal training.

× Do you like singing? Yes, I really like singing. Uh, I'm a big times bathroom singer.

✓ Yes, I really like singing. I'm a big-time bathroom singer.

句子中“big times bathroom singer”词序和用法错误。应使用合成形容词“big-time”来修饰名词，且不需要重复提问句。建议：把口语填充词（uh）删去，使用“big-time bathroom singer”来表达“非常喜欢在洗手间唱歌的人”。

× I like singing because I think it can give me energy and can make me uh, in a good mood.

✓ I like singing because I think it can give me energy and put me in a good mood.

原句中‘make me in a good mood’搭配错误。动词短语应为“put someone in a good mood”或“make someone feel good”。建议使用正确的动词搭配以表达使人心情变好。

× So I think I really like singing.

✓ So I think I really enjoy singing.

句子用词重复且不自然。“like singing”可以改为更自然的“enjoy singing”。建议用更地道的动词以提高表达流畅度。

× I think I don't, uh, I don't learn how to think, but we do really have some music classes in uh, uh, middle school, uh, primary school and high school.

✓ I don't think I learned how to sing, but we did have some music classes in primary school, middle school and high school.

时态和动词用法混乱：谈论过去经历应使用过去时“learned/did have”。原句中“learn how to think”显然是错误用词，应为“learn how to sing”。建议把动作放在过去时，并改正词汇错误。

× So I think, uh, maybe I will learn how to sing in, in the classes, but not is very, not very, uh, professionally.

✓ So maybe I learned how to sing in those classes, but not very professionally.

原句时态与副词位置错误。若指过去经历应为过去时“learned”；“not very professionally”中“is”多余且位置不当。建议删除多余词并把副词放在动词后。

× Truth be told, I never thought about who, uh, who I want to sing for because I just want to sing for myself for it's very form uh,

✓ Truth be told, I never thought about whom I want to sing for because I just want to sing for myself—it feels personal.

“who I want to sing for”在正式语境中作宾语应使用“whom”；原句“for it's very form”语义不明，应用更明确表达如“it feels personal”。建议使用“whom”或重构句子以提高准确性和清晰度。

× But when, if we hanging out with my friend or having a party, I will sing for my friend to uh, uh, to inspired and uh, give energy.

✓ But when we hang out with my friends or have a party, I will sing for my friends to inspire them and to give them energy.

动词形式和主谓一致错误：“we hanging out”应为“we hang out”；复数一致性“my friend”应为“my friends”；“to inspired”应为不定式原形“to inspire”。建议使用动词原形或正确的-ing形式并保持单复数一致。

× The parties and make a positive atmosphere, but truth be told, I don't want to singing for anybody's.

✓ They help make a positive atmosphere, but truth be told, I don't want to sing for anybody.

句子结构混乱：缺少主语时用“they”；“want to singing”动词不定式用法错误，应为“want to sing”；“anybody's”错误的所有格形式，应为“anybody”。建议修正主语并用正确的不定式与代词形式。

× I think singing can uh, affect people's emotion more than we realize.

✓ I think singing can affect people's emotions more than we realize.

可数名词“emotion”应使用复数“emotions”来泛指人们的情绪。建议注意可数名词的单复数形式以保持语义准确。

× I think when you are singing, uh, it make people feel like you are enjoying this moment.

✓ I think when you are singing, it makes people feel like you are enjoying the moment.

主谓不一致：“it make”应为“it makes”。同时“this moment”可改为更自然的“the moment”。建议注意第三人称单数现在时加-s。

× And if people, uh, so you are enjoying the moment, it will affect them as well.

✓ And if people see that you are enjoying the moment, it will affect them as well.

句子缺少必要动词，导致不完整。“if people, so you are…”语义不清。建议明确动词（如“see”或“notice”）以完成条件从句。

× Uh, and the positive and uh, habit in this. Area and it will create a more positive and and relaxing atmosphere.

✓ And the positive habits in this area will create a more positive and relaxing atmosphere.

原句断句和重复词“and and”导致不连贯；“habit in this. Area”分词位置错误。建议合并短句并去掉重复词，使结构完整。

× Yes of course. I live in a family which my father always sings and I love it.

✓ Yes, of course. I live in a family where my father always sings, and I love it.

关系从句连接词错误，应使用“where”来表示地点或情境“我生活的家庭”，而不是“which”。建议使用恰当的关系词以连接从句。

× I think it can. I think singing can give people energy and create a more positive vibe.

✓ I think singing can give people energy and create a more positive vibe.

句中多余的断句“I think it can.”造成不完整。合并句子使表达连贯。建议删除无用分句。

× When you are singing or listening to others singing, it will affect you to have a good mood.

✓ When you are singing or listening to others sing, it will put you in a good mood.

动名词短语和动词搭配不当：“listening to others singing”可改为“listening to others sing”；“affect you to have a good mood”搭配错误，应为“put you in a good mood”。建议使用正确的动词搭配。

× I really like listening to other singing.

✓ I really like listening to others sing.

“other singing”用法不正确，应使用复数代词“others”加动词原形“sing”。建议使用“listening to others sing”。

× Uh, I think I have let's because, uh, in my primary school, uh, middle school and, uh, high school, we have the music classes that, uh, help us to learn, uh, how to singing and how to listening.

✓ I think I have, because in primary school, middle school and high school we had music classes that helped us learn how to sing and how to listen.

时态应为过去时：“we had”“helped”“learn”“how to sing/listen”。原句混用现在时和不正确的动词形式“how to singing/how to listening”。建议把动词改为过去式并使用不定式或动词原形。

× So I have a sing class, but I don't think it's very professional.

✓ So I had a singing class, but I don't think it was very professional.

名词和冠词用法错误：“a sing class”应为“a singing class”或更自然的“a singing lesson”；谈论过去经历时应使用过去时“had”和“was”。建议修正名词形式并使用正确时态。