Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Sing can let me feel relaxed”应改为“Singing makes me feel relaxed”。此外，句子结构不够清晰，表达的意思有些混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的动名词形式，并且避免不相关的词汇。

예시: Yes, I definitely like singing. It helps me feel relaxed and allows me to escape from daily stress. Singing is the first thing I enjoy doing when I wake up.

제안: 你的回答中多次出现“seeing”一词，显然是想表达“singing”，但拼写错误导致意思不清楚。句子结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的词汇，并且组织句子使其逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing. I have read some books about singing and attended related courses. I also practice singing early in the morning to improve my skills.

제안: 你的回答表达了清晰的观点，但存在语法错误，如“she always sing”应为“she always sang”。建议注意时态一致性，并且可以增加一些细节使回答更丰富。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she taught me how to sing and used to sing to me when I was a baby. Singing for her is a way to show my gratitude.

제안: 你的回答中使用了模糊和不相关的词汇，如“things”，导致表达不清晰。建议使用具体的词汇，如“singing”，并且明确表达观点，避免重复和模糊的句子。

예시: Sure, I think singing can help people escape from daily pressures and bring them happiness. It is a joyful activity that people enjoy in many different situations.

× When I get up, my first choice is always sing.

✓ When I get up, my first choice is always singing.

动词后面作为名词使用时，应使用动名词形式。这里'sing'应改为'singing'，表示喜欢做唱歌这件事。

× Sing can let me feel relaxed and help me escape from the daily pressures I love seeing.

✓ Singing can let me feel relaxed and help me escape from the daily pressures. I love singing.

动词作为主语时应使用动名词形式。'Sing'应改为'Singing'。另外，'I love seeing'应为'I love singing'，因为前文主题是唱歌。

× I choose seeing as my second measures.

✓ I choose singing as my second measure.

'choose'后面接动名词表示选择做某事，'seeing'应改为'singing'。'measures'应为单数'measure'，表示第二个选择。

× I choose seeing as my second measures.

✓ I choose singing as my second measure.

'second'表示序数词，后面应接单数名词，'measures'应改为单数'measure'。

× I read some books about seeing and attend some related courses.

✓ I read some books about singing and attend some related courses.

'about'后面应接动名词，'seeing'应改为'singing'。

× I always get up earlier to practice my skill.

✓ I always get up earlier to practice my skills.

'skill'通常用复数形式表示技能的种类，故改为'skills'。

× she always sing to me when I was a baby.

✓ she always sang to me when I was a baby.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s或用过去式。这里时态是过去，故用'sang'。

× she always sing to me when I was a baby.

✓ she always sang to me when I was a baby.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去式'sang'。

× Sure, I think things can help people's escape from the daily pressures.

✓ Sure, I think singing can help people escape from the daily pressures.

'things'不符合语境，应为'singing'。'people's escape'结构错误，应为'people escape'。

× A thing can let people feel the happiness because things always use in different situations.

✓ Singing can let people feel happiness because it is always used in different situations.

'A thing'不合适，改为'singing'。'the happiness'应去掉定冠词，'things always use'语法错误，改为'it is always used'。