Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“in the can”应为“in the car”或其他场所，且句子重复且不连贯。建议注意语法结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing while taking a shower or watching music videos.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并避免重复词汇。

예시: No, I haven't taken professional singing lessons because they are expensive and require a lot of time.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和不连贯的表达，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并清晰表达感情和原因。

예시: I'd like to sing for my family because they support me and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because music has been popular since ancient times. Singing a song can make people feel happy and relaxed.

× I like singing in the can because it can relax me and when I take a shower I will I will singing.

✓ I like singing in the car because it can relax me and when I take a shower I will sing.

这里'singing'用法错误，'will'后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词。'singing'应改为'sing'。

× I like singing in the can because it can relax me and when I take a shower I will I will singing.

✓ I like singing in the car because it can relax me and when I take a shower I will sing.

'in the can'应为'in the car'，这里是拼写错误，'car'表示汽车，符合语境。

× No, I haven't learned about the professor professional singing singing lessons because it's it's it is expensive.

✓ No, I haven't learned professional singing lessons because they are expensive.

'haven't learned about the professor professional singing singing lessons'结构不正确，'learned'后面不接'about'，且'reduntant'重复单词应删除。

× No, I haven't learned about the professor professional singing singing lessons because it's it's it is expensive.

✓ No, I haven't learned professional singing lessons because they are expensive.

'it's it's it is'重复且不合适，且'lessons'为复数，指代应使用'they'。

× For example, you need to take a course and it was expensive and will take it up take up your a lot of time.

✓ For example, you need to take a course and it is expensive and will take up a lot of your time.

'take it up take up your a lot of time'结构混乱，'take up a lot of your time'是正确表达。

× I'd like to sing for my family, sing singing for them feel special because they are spo supportive and appreciate my efforts which MO which motivates me to perform better.

✓ I'd like to sing for my family. Singing for them makes me feel special because they are so supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

句子结构混乱，'sing singing for them feel special'应改为'Singing for them makes me feel special'，'spo'应为'so'，'MO'应删除。

× Moreover, start singing which laughter one create creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

✓ Moreover, starting to sing and laughter create a warm and joyful atmosphere.

'start singing which laughter one create creates'语法错误，'start singing'应改为'starting to sing'，'one'多余，动词应用复数'create'。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to to the people because the the the music was popular in ancient generation.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music was popular in ancient generations.

'the people'改为'people'更自然，'the the the'重复删除，'generation'应为复数'generations'。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to to the people because the the the music was popular in ancient generation.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music was popular in ancient generations.

'was'用于单数，'music'作为不可数名词用单数，'generation'应为复数，保持时态一致。

× For example, when you sing a song you will feel happy and relaxable.

✓ For example, when you sing a song you will feel happy and relaxed.

'relaxable'不是正确的形容词，应使用' relaxed'表示放松的感觉。