Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Yes.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
No.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes I think she in can bring happiness to people because she ain't released either thing. We can make people feel happier. It's a great way to expert emotion and relieve stress.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 30.0제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích hát để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions after a long day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 30.0제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không cung cấp thông tin bổ sung. Bạn nên thêm chi tiết về việc học hát như khi nào, ở đâu hoặc ai đã dạy bạn để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
예시: Yes, I have taken singing lessons for two years at a local music school to improve my vocal skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 10.0제안: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và thiếu nội dung. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời có cấu trúc và nội dung rõ ràng.
예시: I want to sing for my family and friends because it makes them happy and strengthens our bond.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 40.0제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng ngôn ngữ không chính xác và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.
예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and helps relieve stress, making them feel more joyful.
문법
× Yes I think she in can bring happiness to people because she ain't released either thing.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it hasn't released anything either.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'she' to refer to 'singing', which is a non-human noun and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'ain't' is informal and incorrect here; 'hasn't' is appropriate for the present perfect negative. The phrase 'either thing' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'anything either' fits better in this context.
× Yes I think she in can bring happiness to people because she ain't released either thing.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it hasn't released anything either.
The phrase 'she in can bring' contains an incorrect preposition 'in' which should be removed to form the correct phrase 'can bring'.
× We can make people feel happier.
✓ We can make people feel happier.
This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain pronoun errors.
× It's a great way to expert emotion and relieve stress.
✓ It's a great way to express emotion and relieve stress.
The word 'expert' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'express' to convey the intended meaning of showing or conveying emotion.
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