Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容もやや曖昧です。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I like singing because it makes me happy and reminds me of my favorite movie, Frozen."のように。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and reminds me of my favorite movie, Frozen, which I enjoyed a lot during high school.

제안: 答えが少し不明瞭で、文法的な誤りもあります。将来の意図を明確に伝えるために、シンプルで正確な表現を使いましょう。例えば、「I haven't learned singing formally, but I want to take lessons in the future to improve and enjoy it more.」のように。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I want to take singing lessons in the future to improve my skills and enjoy singing more.

제안: 文法と表現が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。誰のために歌いたいかを明確にし、その理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I want to sing for myself because it helps me relax and reduce stress.」のように。

예시: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me relax and reduces my stress.

제안: 回答が繰り返しや文法の誤りで分かりにくいです。シンプルで明確な理由を述べ、具体的な効果を説明しましょう。例えば、「Yes, singing makes me feel relaxed and happier, so I believe it can bring happiness to others too.」のように。

예시: Yes, singing makes me feel relaxed and happier, so I believe it can bring happiness to other people as well.

× Yes, I love singing because when I was in military high school student, uh, Frozen was so popular and I liked Anna, so I. Sing a song.

✓ Yes, I love singing because when I was a military high school student, Frozen was very popular and I liked Anna, so I sang a song.

The sentence contains a past tense issue where 'Sing a song' should be in past tense 'sang a song' to match the past context. Also, 'military high school student' needs an article 'a'.

× No, I haven't, but I think I'm good at singing a song, so in the future I want to learn, sing a song to be more grateful.

✓ No, I haven't, but I think I'm good at singing, so in the future I want to learn to sing a song to be more grateful.

The phrase 'learn, sing a song' is incorrect; it should be 'learn to sing a song' using the infinitive form after 'learn'. Also, 'singing a song' is better as 'singing' for natural expression.

× I think it is myself because singing a song. Allow to decrease my stress and for relax.

✓ I think it is for myself because singing a song allows me to decrease my stress and relax.

The sentence has incorrect preposition use and sentence structure. 'Allow to decrease' should be 'allows me to decrease', and 'for relax' should be 'and relax'. Also, 'it is myself' is unnatural; 'it is for myself' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, because when I singing a song, when I sing a song, I'm so relaxed and I feel better than. No mild condition.

✓ Yes, because when I sing a song, I'm so relaxed and I feel better than when I have a mild condition.

The phrase 'when I singing a song' is incorrect; it should be 'when I sing a song' (present tense). Also, the sentence 'I feel better than. No mild condition.' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'I feel better than when I have a mild condition' for clarity and grammatical correctness.