Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、文法を正しくし、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"Singing helps me relax because I enjoy music, especially when I listen to bands."のように言えます。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. I also enjoy listening to bands, which inspires me to sing more.

제안: 回答が短く、文法的に不自然です。現在の状況と意欲を明確に伝えるために、正しい時制と表現を使いましょう。例えば、"I have started learning how to sing recently, but I am not very good yet, so I want to improve."のように言えます。

예시: I have recently started learning how to sing, but I am still a beginner. I want to improve my skills through practice.

제안: 理由が不明瞭で文が途中で終わっているため、意味が伝わりにくいです。誰のために歌いたいのか、そしてその理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I want to sing for my mother because I want to express my gratitude to her every day."のように言えます。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because I want to show her how much I appreciate her support every day.

제안: 回答が不完全で文法的に誤りが多いです。歌や音楽が人々に幸福をもたらす理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because music makes people smile and helps them relax."のように言えます。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music often makes them smile and feel relaxed.

× Yes I do because singing is help me to relax and.

✓ Yes, I do because singing helps me to relax.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular present tense 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'is help' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helps'.

× I like band, so I like singing.

✓ I like bands, so I like singing.

The noun 'band' should be plural 'bands' to indicate general preference. Also, 'like band' is incorrect without an article or plural form.

× Now I have, but I'm not good at singing so I want to learn singing.

✓ I have learned, but I'm not good at singing, so I want to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'Now I have' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I have learned' to indicate past experience. Also, 'learn singing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'learn how to sing'.

× I want to sing for my mother because.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because I love her.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a reason after 'because'. A complete sentence is necessary for clarity.

× I want to tell the everyday.

✓ I want to tell her every day.

The phrase 'tell the everyday' is incorrect. It should be 'tell her every day' to correctly use the pronoun and express frequency.

× Music is.

✓ Music is important.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'Music is'. A complete sentence is needed.

× Being smiling many people and seeing it good for any people to relax.

✓ It makes many people smile and is good for people to relax.

The phrase 'Being smiling many people' is incorrect; 'makes many people smile' is correct. Also, 'seeing it good' should be 'is good'. The sentence structure and word choice need correction for clarity.