Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi ancak bazı ifadeler anlamsal olarak karışık ve gereksiz tekrarlar içeriyor. "try to pee" ifadesi anlam açısından uygun değil ve cümlenin akışını bozuyor. Daha açık ve etkili ifadeler kullanarak, cümlenizi 3-4 cümle ile sınırlandırmalısınız.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it feels like therapy to me. Although I think my voice is not very good, I love singing alone as it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam bütünlüğü ve dil bilgisi sorunları var. "I like to win someday" ifadesi soruyla uyumsuz ve belirsiz. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz kısa ve tamamlanmamış. Daha net ve doğrudan cevap verip, neden öğrenmek istediğinizi açıklamalısınız.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I really want to learn because I love singing. I hope to improve my skills in the future.

제안: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. "I like to sing in healthy" ifadesi anlam açısından net değil. Daha açık ve doğrudan cevap vererek, kimler için şarkı söylemek istediğinizi ve nedenlerini belirtmelisiniz.

예시: I would like to sing for my idols like Billie Eilish because I admire her music. Also, I want to sing for my father since he is a singer and a great guitar player.

제안: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. "more delusional" ifadesi yanlış kullanılmış ve anlamı olumsuz. Daha net ve tutarlı ifadeler kullanarak, neden şarkı söylemenin mutluluk getirdiğini açıklamalısınız.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it acts like a therapy. It helps people feel relaxed and improves their mood.

× It's I think the worst voice ever in the world.

✓ I think it's the worst voice ever in the world.

The sentence has a word order issue affecting clarity. 'It's I think' is incorrect; the correct order is 'I think it's'. This is not a singular/plural issue but a sentence structure issue; however, since singular/plural is the closest category, it is used here. The subject 'it' and verb 'is' should be together for clarity.

× But I love singing it by myself.

✓ But I love singing by myself.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'singing' is a gerund acting as the object. Saying 'singing it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'singing by myself'.

× It makes me comfortable and try to pee.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The phrase 'try to pee' is inappropriate and likely a mistake. The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is probably that singing makes the speaker feel comfortable and relaxed. 'Try to pee' should be removed and replaced with a suitable phrase.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past participle form; 'learned' is the American English form. Both are correct, but consistency is important. Since the rest of the text uses American English, 'learned' is preferred.

× I like to win someday because I love singing so much as I say so.

✓ I want to win someday because I love singing so much, as I said.

'I like to win' is awkward; 'I want to win' is more natural. 'As I say so' is incorrect; the past tense 'as I said' fits better. Pronoun and verb usage need correction for clarity.

× I wanna. I want to learn so much. I'd like to. I enjoyed it.

✓ I want to. I want to learn a lot. I'd like to. I would enjoy it.

'I wanna' is informal and incomplete. 'I want to learn so much' is better as 'I want to learn a lot.' 'I enjoyed it' is past tense, but the context suggests future or present desire, so 'I would enjoy it' is better.

× It is actually very difficult question to answer because I have many, many idols in that, uh, in that thing.

✓ It is actually a very difficult question to answer because I have many idols in that area.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'very difficult question.' The phrase 'in that, uh, in that thing' is vague and ungrammatical; 'in that area' or 'in that category' is clearer.

× I like to sing in healthy or maybe Billie Eilish.

✓ I like to sing like Halsey or maybe Billie Eilish.

'Sing in healthy' is incorrect; likely the speaker meant 'like Halsey' (a singer). The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'like' is the correct preposition to express similarity.

× So I like to these people, I don't know.

✓ So I like these people, I don't know.

The phrase 'like to these people' is incorrect; 'like these people' is correct. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× people who sings, I think sing sings make people more happy, more delusional.

✓ people who sing, I think singing makes people happier and more relaxed.

'People who sings' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'sing'. 'Sing sings' is incorrect repetition. 'More happy' should be 'happier'. 'More delusional' is inappropriate; likely the intended word is 'more relaxed' or 'joyful'.