Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Malaysia), try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I am not really interested in singing' instead of 'I don't really interested'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, avoiding unnecessary words like 'really' twice. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I am not really interested in singing because I think I lack talent. However, I used to enjoy it in primary school, and I even won first prize in a singing competition, which was a memorable experience.

제안: Use correct tense and sentence structure in English (Malaysia). For example, say 'we were offered' instead of 'we are offer'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'former singing class' and use simpler expressions. Link your ideas clearly to improve coherence.

예시: No, I have never attended a formal singing class. However, in primary school, we were offered a singing lesson every week, and I learned some music theory from the teacher during those sessions.

제안: In English (Malaysia), use correct verb forms such as 'enjoy singing' instead of 'enjoy to sing'. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and concise.

예시: I would love to sing for my family and friends, especially during their birthday celebrations, because it makes the occasion more special and memorable. I am also grateful for the chance to sing for them.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and clearer linking words in English (Malaysia). For example, use 'uplifting atmosphere' and explain how it affects people. Also, avoid repeating 'audience' too often.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, attending a concert is common nowadays because the uplifting and energetic atmosphere allows people to fully enjoy and immerse themselves in the music.

× I don't really interested in singing because I think I have no much talent for it, but I used to enjoy singing when I was in primary school.

✓ I am not really interested in singing because I think I do not have much talent for it, but I used to enjoy singing when I was in primary school.

The phrase 'I don't really interested' is incorrect because 'interested' is an adjective and needs a linking verb like 'am' to connect it to the subject. Also, 'no much talent' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not much talent' to express a negative quantity. The correct sentence uses 'I am not really interested' and 'I do not have much talent'. Suggestion: Use the verb 'to be' with adjectives and use 'not much' instead of 'no much' for negative quantity.

× I even won a first prize in a singing competition, which really a memorable experience for me.

✓ I even won a first prize in a singing competition, which was really a memorable experience for me.

The clause 'which really a memorable experience' is missing the verb 'was' to complete the sentence. Relative clauses need a verb to link the subject and complement. Adding 'was' corrects the sentence structure. Suggestion: Always include a verb in relative clauses to maintain sentence completeness.

× No, I have never attended a former singing class.

✓ No, I have never attended a formal singing class.

The word 'former' means previous or earlier, which does not fit the context. The intended word is 'formal', meaning official or structured. This is a vocabulary choice rather than grammar, but it affects clarity. Suggestion: Use 'formal' to describe official classes instead of 'former'.

× However, in my primary school we are offer a singing lesson every week and I have learned some music theory from the teacher during the session.

✓ However, in my primary school we were offered a singing lesson every week and I learned some music theory from the teacher during the session.

The phrase 'we are offer' is incorrect; the correct past passive form is 'we were offered' because the action happened in the past. Also, 'have learned' can be simplified to 'learned' to maintain past tense consistency. Suggestion: Use past passive 'were offered' for past habitual actions and keep tense consistent.

× I really enjoy to sing for them to makes the occasion more special and memorable.

✓ I really enjoy singing for them to make the occasion more special and memorable.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive ('to sing'). Also, 'makes' should be 'make' because the subject is 'to make' (infinitive phrase) which takes base form. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'enjoy' and use base form of verb after 'to' in purpose clauses.

× I'm also so grateful to sing for them.

✓ I'm also so grateful to be able to sing for them.

The phrase 'grateful to sing' is awkward; usually, 'grateful to be able to sing' or 'grateful for the opportunity to sing' is used. Adding 'be able to' clarifies the meaning. Suggestion: Use 'grateful to be able to' to express appreciation for the ability to do something.