Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语音错误（"saying" 应为 "singing"），且表达略显重复和不够自然。建议注意发音准确性，避免重复表达，并且可以用更自然的表达方式来描述自己的感受。

예시: No, I don't enjoy singing because I'm not very good at it. I often feel embarrassed when I sing in front of others, so I usually avoid it.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不够流畅的问题，如"singing technique"应为复数形式"singing techniques"，"that way is convenient"表达不自然。建议使用更准确的语法和更自然的表达，同时减少口头语。

예시: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some singing techniques by watching videos on YouTube. I often mimic the vocal exercises because I find this method convenient.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有些口头语（如"uh"）影响流畅性。建议减少口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I would like to sing for my dad or mom, especially on their birthdays, because it is a special way to show my love and appreciation for everything they have done for me.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），语法错误（"when people singing"应为"when people sing"），且口头语较多。建议注意拼写和语法准确性，减少口头语，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and reduce stress. When people sing their favorite songs, they can express their emotions, which is a good way to relieve pressure.

× No, I don't like saying because I'm not very good at it.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it.

这里应该使用动词的-ing形式作为动名词，表示喜欢或不喜欢某个动作。原句中使用了'saying'，应改为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。

× I think when people singing their favorite song, uh, they can express their emotions and that is a good way to release their pressure.

✓ I think when people sing their favorite song, uh, they can express their emotions and that is a good way to release their pressure.

在从句中，动词应使用原形或正确的时态，'when'引导的时间状语从句中动词用一般现在时，不能用动名词形式'singing'，应改为'sing'。

× I often feel embarrassed when I sing in front of fathers, so I usually avoid it.

✓ I often feel embarrassed when I sing in front of my father, so I usually avoid it.

'in front of'后面应接具体的人称或名词，'fathers'复数不合适，且缺少冠词，改为'my father'更符合语境。

× Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some singing technique, uh, by watching films on YouTube, and I often mimic the vocal exercise, so I feel that way is convenient.

✓ Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some singing techniques, uh, by watching films on YouTube, and I often mimic the vocal exercises, so I feel that way is convenient.

'technique'和'exercise'应使用复数形式，因为这里指的是多种技巧和练习。

× Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some singing technique, uh, by watching films on YouTube, and I often mimic the vocal exercise, so I feel that way is convenient.

✓ Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some singing techniques, uh, by watching films on YouTube, and I often mimic the vocal exercises, so I feel that way is convenient.

'technique'和'exercise'应使用复数形式，因为这里指的是多种技巧和练习。

× Yes, I believe seeing can bring happiness to people because it helps them to relax and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them to relax and reduce stress.

原句中'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌，且'seeing'与语境不符。