Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is enthusiastic and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm excited or receive good news. Additionally, gospel songs lift my spirits and encourage me to face the days ahead with positivity.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to organise your answer logically and be more specific about your experience.

예시: Yes, I learnt to sing when I was in secondary school. I was a member of the choir, and we rehearsed on Tuesdays and Thursdays. During moral classes, we would perform songs to support the school's preaching sessions.

제안: Your answer shows a personal touch but is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct verb forms, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your sentences.

예시: I would like to sing for my husband when he is upset with me. I find that singing makes him laugh, and he often tells me he loves my voice. It cheers him up and improves our mood.

제안: Your answer conveys a good idea but contains unclear phrases and minor errors. Avoid abbreviations like 'MOT' unless explained, and use plural forms correctly. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples.

예시: I believe singing can motivate people, especially during difficult times. For example, listening to gospel or inspirational songs can lift their mood and encourage them to face the day with confidence.

× I love singing, most especially whenever I'm excited or I receive a good news.

✓ I love singing, most especially whenever I'm excited or I receive good news.

The word 'news' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. Using 'a good news' is incorrect; the correct form is 'good news' without an article.

× Moreover, gospel song tend to lift off my spirit and encourage me for me to move ahead with my days ahead.

✓ Moreover, gospel songs tend to lift my spirit and encourage me to move ahead with my days.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with the plural verb 'tend'. Also, 'lift off my spirit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lift my spirit'. The phrase 'encourage me for me to move ahead' is redundant; it should be 'encourage me to move ahead'.

× When I was in secondary school, I was in a singing, I was in chorister.

✓ When I was in secondary school, I was a chorister.

The phrase 'I was in a singing' is incorrect and unnecessary. The correct expression is 'I was a chorister', which clearly states the role.

× Then we'll do our rehearsal Tuesdays and Thursdays and during moral classes will render and we ministers song for preaching in school.

✓ Then we would do our rehearsals on Tuesdays and Thursdays, and during moral classes, we would render and minister songs for preaching in school.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'we'll' should be 'we would' to indicate past habitual action; 'rehearsal' should be plural 'rehearsals'; prepositions 'on' for days of the week are needed; 'will render and we ministers song' is incorrect and should be 'we would render and minister songs'.

× I would love to sing for my husband whenever he's angry with me.

✓ I would love to sing for my husband whenever he's angry with me.

This sentence is correct in modal verb usage; no correction needed.

× I do like saying I remember I'm singing.

✓ I do like singing; I remember when I'm singing.

The phrase 'I do like saying' is incorrect; it should be 'I do like singing'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; adding a semicolon and rephrasing improves clarity.

× It's makes like he will start laughing and tell me oh I love your voice.

✓ It makes him start laughing and tell me, 'Oh, I love your voice.'

'It's makes like' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes him'. Also, direct speech should be properly punctuated.

× I am happy now that your song have really lifted.

✓ I am happy now that your song has really lifted me.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular noun 'song'; it should be 'has'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object; adding 'me' completes the meaning.

× I believe singing MOT motivates people most, especially when people are down or in a challenging period.

✓ I believe singing most motivates people, especially when people are down or in a challenging period.

The phrase 'singing MOT motivates' is unclear and likely a typo; 'most motivates' is the correct phrase to express the intended meaning.

× Whenever they listen to gospel song or inspirational music, it helps to lift up their mood and encourage them to face the day ahead, I believe.

✓ Whenever they listen to gospel songs or inspirational music, it helps to lift up their mood and encourage them to face the day ahead, I believe.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context of multiple songs being listened to.