Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and fluency. Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use simple, clear sentences and correct grammar to express your ideas naturally.

예시: I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it. Sometimes, I sing quietly in the bathroom, so people call me a 'bathroom singer.'

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your sentences clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not confident singing in public. Also, I am not good at playing musical instruments, which makes it difficult for me.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct vocabulary and adding linking words to make it more coherent.

예시: I want to sing for my friends and family because they enjoy music a lot. Therefore, I hope I can contribute to their musical experience.

제안: Your answer shows good ideas but is interrupted by filler words and some grammar mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, singing can definitely make people happy because it is relaxing and calming. For example, even sad people can feel better after listening to music.

× You can quite you can call me a bathroom singer because I sometimes sing a little or hymn a little in bathroom in huh.

✓ You can quite call me a bathroom singer because I sometimes sing a little or hum a little in the bathroom.

The sentence has redundant phrases ('you can quite you can') and incorrect pronoun usage ('in bathroom in huh'). Also, 'hymn' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'hum'. The phrase 'in bathroom' lacks the definite article 'the'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, I have not learnt how to sing because as I'm not good with her publicly singing, I am not good at vocal.

✓ No, I have not learnt how to sing because I am not good at singing publicly; I am not good at vocals.

The phrase 'as I'm not good with her publicly singing' is incorrect and unclear. 'Her' is an incorrect pronoun here. Also, 'vocal' should be pluralized to 'vocals' to refer to singing skills. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun and noun usage.

× I am very bad at instruments, which prohibits me.

✓ I am very bad at playing instruments, which discourages me.

The original sentence uses 'prohibits me' incorrectly; 'prohibits' means to forbid, which is not appropriate here. 'Discourages' better expresses the intended meaning. Also, 'bad at instruments' is vague; 'bad at playing instruments' is clearer.

× They are quite fond of musics, so I hope I can contribute something in their musical taste.

✓ They are quite fond of music, so I hope I can contribute something to their musical taste.

'Musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'to' when talking about contributing to someone's taste.

× They are quite fond of musics, so I hope I can contribute something in their musical taste.

✓ They are quite fond of music, so I hope I can contribute something to their musical taste.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to contributing to someone's taste or preference.

× Yes, obviously singing uh can uh make people happy as it is uh, relaxing at it uh is calming in nature, so the sad people also becomes happy after listening to music.

✓ Yes, obviously singing can make people happy as it is relaxing and calming in nature, so sad people also become happy after listening to music.

The phrase 'the sad people also becomes happy' has a subject-verb agreement error; 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'become' not 'becomes'. Also, 'relaxing at it' is incorrect; 'relaxing and' is appropriate. Removing filler words improves clarity.