Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I love music, so I like singing. When I sing a song, I'll feel free. And I can forget what I hate.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
I don't have. But someday I want to learn how to sing because I love music and I want to sing better.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I want to sing for myself because music helps me feel more confident when I listen to the songs. The meaningful lyrics encourage me and give me strength, singing along with me to express my emotions and feel very in difficult situations.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, I think so. For example for me. Getting up early every day is so difficult, but even if I'm sleepy, when I singing or listen to music, I wake up.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りと冗長な表現を改善しましょう。例えば、「I'll feel free」は「I feel free」に修正し、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いです。
예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and forget my worries. Singing allows me to express my emotions freely and enjoy the moment.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 65.0제안: 文法的に正しい表現を使い、回答をより自然にしましょう。例えば、「I don't have」は「I haven't learned」や「I haven't taken singing lessons」に修正し、理由を明確に述べると良いです。
예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I would like to take singing lessons in the future to improve my skills because I love music.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答が少し冗長で文法的に不自然な部分があります。より簡潔で明確な表現を使い、論理的なつながりを意識しましょう。
예시: I want to sing for myself because music boosts my confidence. The meaningful lyrics encourage me and help me express my emotions, especially during difficult times.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 65.0제안: 文法の誤りを直し、回答をより自然で流暢にしましょう。また、具体例をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いです。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, even when I feel tired in the morning, singing or listening to music helps me feel more awake and cheerful.
문법
× I don't have.
✓ I haven't.
The student used 'I don't have' incorrectly to express lack of experience. The correct modal verb phrase is 'I haven't' (short for 'I have not') when referring to experience with 'learnt'. Suggestion: Use 'I haven't' to indicate not having done something before.
× when I singing or listen to music, I wake up.
✓ when I am singing or listening to music, I wake up.
The verb 'singing' and 'listen' need to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Suggestion: Use 'am singing' and 'listening' to correctly express ongoing actions.
× The meaningful lyrics encourage me and give me strength, singing along with me to express my emotions and feel very in difficult situations.
✓ The meaningful lyrics encourage me and give me strength; singing along helps me express my emotions and feel better in difficult situations.
The original sentence is confusing and lacks clarity. 'Singing along with me' is incorrect because lyrics cannot sing. The sentence structure needs to be adjusted to clarify that singing along helps the student express emotions and feel better. Suggestion: Separate ideas clearly and use appropriate subjects for actions.
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