Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I don't sing often since I prefer quiet activities at home.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời giải thích thêm lý do hoặc mong muốn học hát để câu trả lời thêm phong phú.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because my family didn't encourage it. However, I would like to try learning singing in the future.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn không thích hát trước đám đông.

예시: Actually, I feel embarrassed to sing in front of a crowd, so I prefer singing alone in a quiet place where no one can hear me. This way, I can enjoy singing without feeling nervous.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, đồng thời thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax during their free time. For example, many people sing to relieve stress and feel joyful.

× Well, I would I would like to say that I'm really interested in singing because when I sing I feel relaxed and my toes are clearly impressive.

✓ Well, I would like to say that I'm really interested in singing because when I sing I feel relaxed and my tones are clearly impressive.

The word 'toes' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'tones' which relates to singing. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it improves clarity.

× But sometimes singing is not quite good for me. I'm an I'm not an active person so I usually stay at home and didn't listen to at much.

✓ But sometimes singing is not quite good for me. I'm not an active person so I usually stay at home and don't listen to it much.

The phrase 'didn't listen to at much' is incorrect because it mixes past tense 'didn't' with habitual action 'usually'. The correct form is present tense 'don't listen to it much' to match the habitual action.

× Absolutely no because I don't really interested in it and it's not my county too so my all my grand didn't let me go to learn but umm sometime I would like to learn it.

✓ Absolutely not because I'm not really interested in it and it's not my country either so all my grandparents didn't let me go to learn but sometimes I would like to learn it.

The sentence has several pronoun and word choice errors: 'don't really interested' should be 'I'm not really interested' (verb 'to be' needed), 'county' should be 'country', 'my all my grand' is incorrect and should be 'all my grandparents', and 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Actually, I'm so embarrassed to sing before a crowd, so I want to sing along and want to sing in a quiet place that nobody can hear me.

✓ Actually, I'm so embarrassed to sing in front of a crowd, so I want to sing alone and want to sing in a quiet place where nobody can hear me.

The preposition 'before' is incorrect here; 'in front of' is the correct phrase. Also, 'sing along' is incorrect in this context; 'sing alone' fits better. 'That nobody can hear me' should be 'where nobody can hear me' to correctly refer to the place.

× Of course, yes, because seeing is the kind of relaxing when you have the free time, when you have the leisure time.

✓ Of course, yes, because singing is the kind of relaxing activity you can do when you have free time, when you have leisure time.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'the kind of relaxing' is incomplete; adding 'activity' clarifies the meaning. 'The free time' should be 'free time' without 'the'.