Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“recently that I have been seeing in every day”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing. Recently, I have been singing every day at home, and it has become a part of my daily routine. I find it very enjoyable and relaxing.

제안: 回答中时态和表达不够准确，如“can't have it as much as I used to do”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，句子结构更简洁。

예시: Yes, I used to take singing classes regularly. However, now I am very busy with my studies, so I don't have time for classes. But I hope to return to singing lessons in the future.

제안: 回答中存在代词混用和语法错误，如“he”指代奶奶不正确，句子结构混乱。建议理清句子结构，正确使用代词，并使表达更连贯。

예시: I want to sing for my grandma because she is a big fan of music. She often sings with me, but she prefers listening to me sing more.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“things that people down”不合语法，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的表达方式，并提供更具体的理由或例子。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a fun activity. Many people enjoy going to karaoke bars to sing and relax with friends.

× Actually, yes, recently that I have been seeing in every day at my home and it has already become my daily routine.

✓ Actually, yes, recently I have been singing every day at my home and it has already become my daily routine.

句中使用了"seeing"，但根据上下文应为"singing"，且"that"多余，应去掉。"have been seeing in every day"结构不正确，应改为"have been singing every day"。这里是现在完成进行时，表示最近的持续动作。

× Actually, yes, before I usually went to the class to learn how to sing, but now I can't have it as much as I used to do because I'm very busy in my study and in the future I guess I will probably return to class.

✓ Actually, yes, before I usually went to class to learn how to sing, but now I can't do it as much as I used to because I'm very busy with my studies and in the future I guess I will probably return to class.

"went to the class"中"the"不必要，应为"went to class"。"can't have it"表达不准确，应为"can't do it"。"busy in my study"应改为"busy with my studies"，更符合英语习惯。

× I suppose I want to sing for my grandma because she is an crazy fan of music and he always sings a song with me together but he prefer listening, she prefer listening to music from me.

✓ I suppose I want to sing for my grandma because she is a crazy fan of music and she always sings a song with me, but she prefers listening; she prefers listening to music from me.

句中将奶奶称为"she"，但后面错误使用了"he"，应统一使用"she"。"an crazy"应改为"a crazy"，因为crazy以辅音音素开头。动词"prefer"应根据主语变为"prefers"。

× Actually, yes, because it is one of the most interesting and fun things that people down and a lot of people like to go to the karaoke to sing.

✓ Actually, yes, because it is one of the most interesting and fun things that people do and a lot of people like to go to karaoke to sing.

"things that people down"中的"down"用错，应为"do"。"go to the karaoke"中"the"不必要，应为"go to karaoke"。