Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
No, not really. I don't enjoy singing because I Can't Sing very well. Although I have seen lessons almost everyday at school. I just Can't Sing very well because I can't carry a tomb.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Yes, of course, as I said before, I have seen lessons as part of school clarium. So it's an it's a compulsory lesson and everyone should learn how to sing.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Absolutely. My parents and grandparents. I don't believe it's a perfect way to sing for the older generation in order to show our gratitude and respect towards them.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Well, it really depends on the individuals. For some people they prefer to sing because they can enjoy their leisure time through singing and it's their way to chill out, while others they just can't, They don't really enjoy the same because.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 50.0제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Can't Sing”应为“can't sing”，“carry a tomb”应为“carry a tune”。建议注意大小写和正确表达，同时避免重复表达相同意思。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体原因支持。
예시: No, I don't like singing because I can't carry a tune well. Although I have singing lessons almost every day at school, I still find it difficult to sing in tune.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中有拼写错误（如“clarium”应为“curriculum”），且表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并且结构更清晰。
예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing because it is a compulsory subject in our school curriculum, so everyone is required to take singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中表达不够自然，“Absolutely”用法不当，且句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。
예시: I want to sing for my parents and grandparents because I believe singing is a good way to show gratitude and respect to the older generation.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明原因。
예시: I think singing can bring happiness to some people because it helps them relax and enjoy their free time, but others may not enjoy singing as much because they don't feel confident or interested in it.
문법
× I have seen lessons almost everyday at school.
✓ I have seen lessons almost every day at school.
这里的错误是副词拼写错误，'everyday'是形容词，表示'日常的'，而这里需要副词短语'every day'表示'每天'。应使用'every day'。
× I just Can't Sing very well because I can't carry a tomb.
✓ I just can't sing very well because I can't carry a tune.
这里'tomb'是拼写错误，正确表达是'carry a tune'，意思是能唱准音调。应改正拼写错误。
× I have seen lessons as part of school clarium.
✓ I have seen lessons as part of school curriculum.
'clarium'是拼写错误，正确单词是'curriculum'，表示课程。应改正拼写错误。
× So it's an it's a compulsory lesson and everyone should learn how to sing.
✓ So it's a compulsory lesson and everyone should learn how to sing.
句中重复使用了冠词'an'和'a'，应删除多余的冠词。
× For some people they prefer to sing because they can enjoy their leisure time through singing and it's their way to chill out, while others they just can't, They don't really enjoy the same because.
✓ For some people, they prefer to sing because they can enjoy their leisure time through singing and it's their way to chill out, while others just can't. They don't really enjoy it the same way.
句子中逗号和句号使用不当，导致句子结构混乱。'others they just can't'中重复使用主语，应去掉其中一个。'enjoy the same because'表达不完整，应改为'enjoy it the same way'。
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