Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然且表达了个人感受，但句子结构稍显简单，且“although I'm not a good singer”部分可以更流畅地表达。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and take my mind off worries, even though I'm not very skilled at it.

제안: 语法错误明显，如“don't learned”应为“haven't learned”。表达不够自然，且“sing with myself”不符合英语习惯，建议改为“I usually sing by myself”。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I usually sing by myself for fun.

제안: 回答直接，但缺乏细节和连接词。建议补充原因或情感描述，使回答更丰富和连贯。

예시: I want to sing for my idol and my friends because they inspire me and I want to show my appreciation for their support.

제안: 回答重复使用“I think”，显得冗余。建议使用连接词和多样化表达，增加具体细节。

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions, and it can also inspire hope during difficult times.

× No, I don't learned how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

这里使用了助动词'do'的否定形式'don't'，但后面动词却用了过去式'learned'，这是错误的。正确的表达应该用现在完成时'haven't learned'，表示到目前为止没有学过。建议使用现在完成时态来表达过去发生并持续到现在的动作。