Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构不完整。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，如"singing"应改为"sing"，并避免句子中出现不连贯的部分。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式，并且控制答案长度在五句以内。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For example, when I feel stressed, I often sing my favorite songs alone in the bathroom. Singing makes me feel happier and more peaceful.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议避免重复，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，如"mock the singers' sounds"可以改为"imitate singers' voices"。同时，回答应更连贯，表达清楚自己没有接受过专业训练。

예시: No, I have never had professional singing lessons. However, I enjoy imitating singers' voices for fun, which is just a hobby for me.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如"of of"和"I only singing"。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，表达更自然流畅。同时，可以适当丰富内容，说明害羞的原因或感受。

예시: Actually, I don't have anyone in particular I want to sing for because I am quite shy. I usually sing alone when I am by myself, so I prefer to keep it private.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免冗长和重复。可以具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I listen to male vocalists in bands, their voices help calm emotions and make people feel joyful.

× I will singing in my bathroom and seeing my best favorite songs like.

✓ I will sing in my bathroom and watch my favorite songs.

这里的“will”后面应该接动词原形，所以“singing”应改为“sing”，“seeing”应改为“watch”。另外，表达“喜欢的歌曲”用“favorite songs”更自然。

× No, but I usually like mock the singers sounds, the voice and it's not kind of professional training.

✓ No, but I usually like to mock the singers' sounds and voices, and it's not a kind of professional training.

动词“like”后面接动词时应使用不定式“to mock”，而不是动名词“mock”。另外，“singers sounds”应为复数所有格“singers' sounds”，且“voice”应复数“voices”。

× So it's quite like a interest interest for me.

✓ So it's quite an interest for me.

“interest”是名词，前面应使用不定冠词“an”，且“interest interest”重复，应去掉一个。

× Actually I can not think of of the persons that I want to sing for 'cause I'm really shy and singing.

✓ Actually, I cannot think of any person that I want to sing for because I'm really shy about singing.

“persons”在这里应使用单数“person”，且“think of of”重复，应去掉一个“of”。

× I only singing by myself when I was alone.

✓ I only sing by myself when I am alone.

“only”后面应接动词原形“sing”，且时态应与现在习惯相符，故用现在时“am”。

× So there's no person that I want to sing for.

✓ So there is no person that I want to sing for.

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，语法正确，但正式写作中建议写全称。

× Of course, the power of this singing is quite magical for me when I was listening to those band vocal boys, it's quite calm down people's emotion and they'll make people's really enjoyable in their voice.

✓ Of course, the power of singing is quite magical for me. When I listen to those band vocal boys, it calms down people's emotions and makes people really enjoy their voices.

“when I was listening”改为一般现在时“when I listen”，因为表达习惯性动作；“it's quite calm down”语法错误，应为“it calms down”；“they'll make people's really enjoyable”结构错误，应为“makes people really enjoy”；“people's”应为复数“people”的宾格形式。