Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ звучит немного неестественно и содержит некоторые ошибки, например, слово "aisles" вместо "arias". Также ответ можно сделать более связным и логичным, избегая излишней самоуверенности и добавляя более конкретные детали. Попробуйте использовать связующие слова для плавного перехода между предложениями.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions. I have a lyrical soprano voice, so I prefer singing arias from operas, which suit my vocal range well.

제안: Ответ содержит разрозненные и неполные предложения, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется строить предложения более связно, использовать связующие слова и избегать лишних пауз. Также стоит уточнить детали, например, где именно вы брали уроки и чему научились.

예시: Yes, I used to attend choir lessons where I sang as a soprano. My teacher often praised my singing skills, which encouraged me to improve further.

제안: Ответ достаточно понятен и логичен, но можно улучшить связность и разнообразить лексику. Избегайте повторов, таких как "pretty shy, pretty sheepish", и используйте более точные выражения. Добавьте связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: To be honest, I prefer singing only for myself because I feel quite shy and lack confidence when performing in front of others. I'm afraid they might judge me, so I find comfort in singing alone.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и немного неестественные выражения, например, "more happier" и "inside of our hearts and brain". Рекомендуется использовать более точные и естественные фразы, а также разнообразить лексику и структуру предложения.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. When we sing, it uplifts our spirits and creates a sense of joy and relaxation.

× I have an amazingly beautiful voice.

✓ I have an amazingly beautiful voice.

The sentence is grammatically correct. 'Amazingly' correctly modifies the adjective 'beautiful'. No correction needed.

× I'm a lyrical soprano and that's why I prefer to sing some aisles, some, for example, opera songs.

✓ I'm a lyrical soprano and that's why I prefer to sing some arias, for example, opera songs.

The word 'aisles' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'arias', which are operatic solo songs. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but correcting it improves clarity.

× Yes, I used to go to my. Choir lessons and I also was a soprano.

✓ Yes, I used to go to my choir lessons and I was also a soprano.

The sentence has a misplaced period after 'my' which breaks the sentence. Also, 'I also was a soprano' is better as 'I was also a soprano' for natural word order. The verb 'used to go' correctly indicates past habitual action.

× I'm pretty shy, pretty sheepish and that's why I'm not feeling confident while singing next to other people.

✓ I'm pretty shy and pretty sheepish, and that's why I don't feel confident singing next to other people.

The phrase 'not feeling confident' should be 'don't feel confident' to match the present tense and subject-verb agreement. Also, 'while singing' is better as 'singing' here for natural expression.

× Yes, singing is indeed bringing happiness to people.

✓ Yes, singing indeed brings happiness to people.

The present continuous 'is bringing' is less appropriate here; the simple present 'brings' is better to express a general truth. 'Indeed' is correctly placed.

× I think that singing could make anyone more happier than before.

✓ I think that singing could make anyone happier than before.

The word 'more' is unnecessary before the comparative adjective 'happier'. Using both 'more' and '-er' is redundant. The correct form is 'happier'.