Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes I do because it help me release threat when I release threat from studying or working.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No I haven't I just think like the song on TikTok or YouTube. Yes I'm not learn to sing.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Everyone who wants to hear my when I sing yes.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Umm yes of course, like I have said before that singing can release my strength, so I think that will be true to order.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi chính tả như 'threat' thay vì 'stress'. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress after studying or working hard. Singing allows me to relax and feel happier.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 40.0제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng các câu không chính xác về ngữ pháp như 'I'm not learn to sing'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I usually just enjoy listening to songs on TikTok or YouTube.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 45.0제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: I want to sing for anyone who enjoys listening to my voice. It makes me happy to share my singing with others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 50.0제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'release my strength'. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và có liên kết logic trong câu trả lời.
예시: Yes, of course. As I mentioned before, singing helps me relieve stress, so I believe it can bring happiness to many people.
문법
× Yes I do because it help me release threat when I release threat from studying or working.
✓ Yes I do because it helps me release stress when I release stress from studying or working.
The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'threat' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'stress'.
× No I haven't I just think like the song on TikTok or YouTube. Yes I'm not learn to sing.
✓ No I haven't. I just like the songs on TikTok or YouTube. Yes, I haven't learned to sing.
The sentence requires past tense 'learned' to indicate completed action. 'I'm not learn' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't learned'. Also, 'think like the song' is incorrect; it should be 'like the songs'.
× Everyone who wants to hear my when I sing yes.
✓ Everyone who wants to hear me when I sing, yes.
The pronoun 'my' is incorrect here; the object pronoun 'me' should be used as the object of 'hear'.
× Umm yes of course, like I have said before that singing can release my strength, so I think that will be true to order.
✓ Umm yes of course, like I have said before, singing can release my stress, so I think that is true in order.
The phrase 'true to order' is incorrect; it should be 'true in order' or better 'true indeed'. Also, 'release my strength' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'release my stress'.
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