Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and support it with specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions. I practice regularly and hope to become a professional singer one day.

제안: Your answer is confusing and off-topic. Focus on answering the question directly. If you haven't learnt singing, say so clearly, and express your interest in learning it. Avoid mixing unrelated topics like learning English.

예시: No, I have never learnt how to sing formally, but I would love to take singing lessons in the future to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and completeness. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details. Also, complete your sentences and avoid negative statements without positive follow-up.

예시: I usually like to sing for my partner, parents, and friends. Although my singing skills are not very good now, I am working hard to improve them.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but try to use linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better fluency.

예시: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people. When someone is stressed or in a bad mood, singing or listening to songs can help them relax and feel better.

× Yes, I love seeing me because of my interest and I was a very much singer to sing and I will become a singer one day because I'm practicing for this type of thing.

✓ Yes, I love singing because of my interest and I was a very good singer and I will become a singer one day because I'm practicing for this type of thing.

The phrase 'love seeing me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'love singing' as 'love' is followed by a verb in the -ing form to express enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'very much singer' is incorrect; it should be 'very good singer' to properly describe the noun 'singer'. Suggestion: Use 'love singing' instead of 'love seeing me' and 'very good singer' instead of 'very much singer'.

× Yes, I love seeing me because of my interest and I was a very much singer to sing and I will become a singer one day because I'm practicing for this type of thing.

✓ Yes, I love singing because of my interest and I was a very good singer and I will become a singer one day because I'm practicing for this type of thing.

The phrase 'I was a very much singer to sing' is grammatically incorrect and awkward. The past tense 'was' is acceptable if referring to past ability, but the phrase needs correction for clarity and grammar. Suggestion: Use 'I was a very good singer' to correctly express past ability.

× No, I did not learn how to sing, but if I get a chance to learn music then I definitely want to learn English.

✓ No, I have not learned how to sing, but if I get a chance to learn music, then I definitely want to learn singing.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'did not learn' which is simple past; 'have not learned' is better to express experience up to now. Also, 'want to learn English' is likely a mistake; context suggests 'want to learn singing'. Suggestion: Use present perfect 'have not learned' for experience and correct the object to 'singing' instead of 'English'.

× Usually I think for my partner and my parents or my friends, but I have very bad singing skills that's why they don't like every time. But I could improve my.

✓ Usually, I think of my partner, my parents, or my friends, but I have very bad singing skills; that's why they don't like it every time. But I could improve.

The phrase 'think for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'think of'. Also, 'they don't like every time' is incomplete; it should be 'they don't like it every time'. The sentence 'But I could improve my.' is incomplete and should be 'But I could improve.' Suggestion: Use 'think of' instead of 'think for', add 'it' after 'like', and complete the last sentence.

× Absolutely yes, singing can bring happiness to people because if a person having bad mood or getting stressed then they can listen or sing a song while listening because it is very helpful for them and get a good mood and get relaxed.

✓ Absolutely yes, singing can bring happiness to people because if a person is in a bad mood or getting stressed, then they can listen to or sing a song because it is very helpful for them to improve their mood and relax.

The phrase 'a person having bad mood' is missing the verb 'is' and the preposition 'in' before 'a bad mood'. Also, 'listen or sing a song while listening' is redundant; 'listen to or sing a song' is correct. 'Get a good mood and get relaxed' is awkward; better to say 'improve their mood and relax'. Suggestion: Use 'is in a bad mood', 'listen to or sing a song', and 'improve their mood and relax' for clarity and correctness.