Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。"literally some stress"は意味が通じにくいため、ストレス解消になることを明確に伝える表現に改善しましょう。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and feel more relaxed.

제안: 回答が断片的で繰り返しがあります。文をつなげて自然な流れにし、具体的な経験をもう少し詳しく説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, I have. When I was in junior high school, I took singing lessons with a music teacher to improve my skills.

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、表現が不自然で文法的に改善が必要です。"release or refresh from some stress"は"relieve stress"などに直し、理由を明確に述べましょう。

예시: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relieve stress and refresh my mind. For example, I often sing in the bathroom.

제안: 回答が不完全で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や具体例を論理的に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: Definitely yes. For example, my mother loves singing and she always feels happy when she sings because it lifts her mood.

× I like singing because it helps me literally some. Stress.

✓ I like singing because it literally helps me with stress.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and a fragment ('Stress.'). The correction rearranges the words to form a complete and clear sentence, connecting 'helps me' with 'literally' and 'with stress' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× When I was a junior high school student, I learned how to sing a song. With music teacher. With a music teacher.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, I learned how to sing a song with a music teacher.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'With music teacher.' and 'With a music teacher.' are sentence fragments lacking a subject and verb. Combining them into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Of course for me because it helps me release or refresh from some stress.

✓ Of course for me because it helps me release or refresh from some stress.

The preposition 'from' is correctly used here to indicate the source of stress. However, the phrase 'release or refresh from some stress' is awkward. A better phrase would be 'release stress or refresh myself.' But since only errors listed in the problem type list should be corrected, no change is made here.

× I always sing a song in my bathroom.

✓ I always sing songs in my bathroom.

The phrase 'a song' is singular but the context suggests a habitual action, so plural 'songs' is more natural. Also, 'sing a song' is correct but 'sing songs' is more common when referring to habitual singing. This correction improves naturalness and clarity.

× Especially my mother loves sing a song and she always feels happy.

✓ Especially my mother loves singing songs and she always feels happy.

The verb 'loves' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' rather than the base form 'sing.' Also, 'a song' is changed to 'songs' to indicate habitual action. This correction aligns with correct verb form usage after 'love.'

× I asked why you were so happy to her, She said the sing song is.

✓ I asked her why she was so happy. She said it was because of singing songs.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun use. 'I asked why you were so happy to her' is incorrect; it should be 'I asked her why she was so happy.' The second part is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to a complete sentence explaining the reason. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.