Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel energized. Moreover, finishing a song gives me a great sense of achievement.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误严重，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的语法和词汇，避免无意义的词汇。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn by watching videos or listening to songs on my phone during my free time.

제안: 回答中多处语法错误且表达不连贯，未能清楚回答问题。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并注意主谓一致和时态。

예시: I like to sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Singing gives me energy to stay positive throughout the day.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达观点，并用具体词汇描述。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and energy to people. It creates a positive and enjoyable atmosphere, which helps improve people's mood.

× I think when I was singing I would feel more relaxed and energized.

✓ I think when I sing I feel more relaxed and energized.

这里描述的是一般现在时的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时而不是过去时。

× It also gives me a sense of achievement when I have finished one songs.

✓ It also gives me a sense of achievement when I have finished one song.

“one”表示单数，后面名词应使用单数形式“song”，而不是复数“songs”。

× I think I not have the holderly tongue for me to learn how to think.

✓ I think I do not have the ability to learn how to sing.

原句中“holderly tongue”不合适，且“not have”缺少助动词，应使用“do not have”。“learn how to think”应为“learn how to sing”。

× I often think just by the videos or by listening the cell phone and some of the time it will just my free time, not alone or the complete time.

✓ I often learn just by watching videos or listening on my cell phone, and sometimes it is just during my free time, not alone or the whole time.

“think”用错，应为“learn”；“by listening the cell phone”应为“listening on my cell phone”；“some of the time it will just my free time”结构不完整，需补充谓语。

× Who do you want to think for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

“think”用错，应为“sing”，符合上下文语境。

× Maybe I want to think for myself because I think, uh, it was same for myself.

✓ Maybe I want to sing for myself because I think, uh, it is the same for me.

“think”应为“sing”；“was”应为现在时“is”，因为表达的是当前感受。

× I were a bit more happy and relaxed.

✓ I was a bit happier and more relaxed.

主语“I”后动词应为“was”而非“were”；“more happy”应改为比较级“happier”。

× It also were full of the energetic for my holder the whole day.

✓ It also gave me energy for the whole day.

“It”作为单数主语，动词应为“was”或改写为“gave”；“energetic”是形容词，名词应为“energy”；“holder”用词不当，改为“me”。

× And since of this is for myself, it's a.

✓ And since this is for myself, it's good.

句子不完整，补充谓语“it's good”；“since of this”应为“since this”。

× Singing is can bring people more happiness and energetic.

✓ Singing can bring people more happiness and energy.

“is can”结构错误，应去掉“is”；“energetic”是形容词，名词应为“energy”。

× It also gets a some inferminia environment.

✓ It also creates a positive environment.

“a some”用法错误，应为“a”或“some”；“inferminia”拼写错误且不合适，改为“positive”。

× So I think thinking will bring people more things.

✓ So I think singing will bring people more happiness.

“thinking”应为“singing”，且“more things”表达不清，改为“more happiness”。