Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Well yes I do, I usually sing in my free time or whenever I get bored because like singing makes me feel relaxing and I usually sing the song that comes from movies that I like.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Well, I never have seen courses, but I do have. But I do learn to sing in my music lessons at school and we sing quite some popular songs in my country, yeah.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
To be honest, there's no accurate target that I want to sing for. I just sing whenever I get bored. So like I'm singing alone and to be honest I'm quite a shy person so I rarely stick with to in front of other people.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Definitely because according to a research that I've looked up on Internet by a famous university in America, it is proof that singing can make the a person move became better as it helps us to relax our neurons and it's also a good way to keep our voice clear.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'like' nhiều lần và cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.
예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I often sing songs from my favorite movies during my free time.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I have never taken formal singing courses, but I learned to sing during music lessons at school where we sang popular songs from my country.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn và tránh lặp từ.
예시: I usually sing alone because I am shy and don't often perform in front of others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng các cụm từ phức tạp không chính xác.
예시: Definitely. Research shows that singing helps people relax and improves their mood. It also keeps the voice healthy.
문법
× like singing makes me feel relaxing
✓ like singing makes me feel relaxed
The adjective 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation, while 'relaxed' describes the feeling of a person. Here, the student wants to express their feeling, so 'relaxed' is correct.
× I never have seen courses, but I do have.
✓ I have never seen courses, but I do have.
The correct word order for the present perfect tense with 'never' is 'have never seen' rather than 'never have seen'. Also, the phrase 'but I do have' is incomplete and unclear; it likely means 'but I do have some experience' or similar, but since the original is unclear, only the word order is corrected.
× But I do learn to sing in my music lessons at school
✓ But I do learn singing in my music lessons at school
The verb 'learn' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to sing' or the gerund 'singing'. Both are possible, but 'learn singing' is more natural in this context when referring to lessons.
× I rarely stick with to in front of other people.
✓ I rarely sing in front of other people.
The phrase 'stick with to' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'sing in front of other people'. The preposition 'in front of' is correct to indicate location.
× it is proof that singing can make the a person move became better
✓ it is proof that singing can make a person's mood better
The phrase 'the a person move became better' is grammatically incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a person's mood better'. 'Mood' fits the context better than 'move', and the possessive form 'person's' is needed.
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