Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然且内容相关，但可以避免重复表达“really good way”，并且可以增加更多具体细节来丰富答案。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me unwind and express my feelings. For instance, I usually sing with my friends twice a month, which strengthens our bond and creates joyful memories.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“saw in front of my friends”应为“sang”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，并使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have. After graduating from high school, I sang in front of my friends for the first time. Although I was nervous and didn't perform well, I have since practiced regularly to improve my singing skills and boost my confidence.

제안: 回答内容温馨，但语法上有小错误，如“accept”应为“accepts”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I want to sing for my baby because he is extremely cute and accepts me as I am without any judgment. Moreover, he enjoys listening to my songs, which helps me feel relaxed. Singing is a wonderful way to express my love for him.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“thing”应为“singing”，以及“seeing”用词不当。建议加强词汇准确性和句子逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because listening to favorite songs helps them feel relaxed and joyful. However, if singing is done in an inappropriate way, it might make others feel uncomfortable.

× After that, I have been practicing singing regularly to improve my skills and build my confidence.

✓ After that, I have been practicing singing regularly to improve my skills and build my confidence.

该句中使用了现在完成进行时态（have been practicing），与前文的过去时间点（After that）搭配合理，无需修改。

× I think it's a good way to relax and express my emotions.

✓ I think it's a good way to relax and express my emotions.

句中主语和谓语一致，单复数使用正确，无需修改。

× I often sing with my friends twice a month, which is a really good way to maintain our friendships.

✓ I often sing with my friends twice a month, which is a really good way to maintain our friendships.

句中friends和friendships复数使用正确，无需修改。

× When I graduated from high school, I saw in front of my friends for the first time.

✓ When I graduated from high school, I sang in front of my friends for the first time.

原句中动词saw（看见）用错，应该用表示“唱歌”的动词sing，且时态正确。

× I believe thing can definitely bring happiness to people because listening to their favorite songs can make them feel relaxed and joyful.

✓ I believe things can definitely bring happiness to people because listening to their favorite songs can make them feel relaxed and joyful.

thing应为复数形式things，表示多种事物，符合语境。

× However, seeing in an inappropriate way will make others feel uncomfortable instead.

✓ However, behaving in an inappropriate way will make others feel uncomfortable instead.

原句中seeing用法不当，应使用behaving表示“行为”，更符合语境。