Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jūsų atsakymas yra natūralus ir nuoširdus, tačiau reikėtų vengti pasikartojimų ir kalbos klaidų, pvz., "maybe not so good" turėtų būti "maybe not very good". Taip pat patartina naudoti aiškią sakinio struktūrą ir vengti nereikalingų žodžių, kad atsakymas būtų efektyvesnis.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing very much. Although I am not very good at it and sometimes miss the pitch, singing my favorite songs brings me great joy and happiness.

제안: Atsakymas yra aiškus ir tiesioginis, tačiau reikėtų atkreipti dėmesį į gramatiką, pvz., "was piano" turėtų būti "were piano lessons" arba "was piano lessons". Taip pat galima pridėti daugiau detalių, kad atsakymas būtų turtingesnis ir sklandesnis.

예시: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons. When I was a child, I had piano lessons, which helped me improve my pitch, but I never learned how to sing formally.

제안: Jūsų atsakymas yra gerai struktūruotas ir turiningas, tačiau reikėtų atkreipti dėmesį į gramatiką, pvz., "a popular songs" turėtų būti "popular songs". Taip pat galite naudoti daugiau jungiamųjų žodžių, kad atsakymas būtų dar sklandesnis.

예시: I would love to sing with my friends, especially during special occasions like birthday parties or holiday celebrations, because it creates a joyful and memorable atmosphere. Although I haven't had many opportunities to do this, I believe singing popular songs or traditional tunes together helps us bond and makes the event more enjoyable.

제안: Atsakymas yra nuoširdus, tačiau reikėtų vengti pasikartojimų, pvz., "I I" ir supaprastinti sakinius, kad jie būtų aiškesni. Taip pat galite pridėti daugiau specifinių detalių, kodėl dainavimas suteikia laimę.

예시: Yes, I definitely believe singing brings happiness. Even though I'm not very skilled, singing gives me simple joy because music is a contagious and uplifting form of expression.

× I maybe not so good at it and I I'm not pitch perfect, but I do like blasting my heart out singing my favorite songs because it gives me such a joy and you know, happiness.

✓ I may not be so good at it and I'm not pitch perfect, but I do like blasting my heart out singing my favorite songs because it gives me such joy and, you know, happiness.

The modal verb 'maybe' is incorrectly used; it should be 'may be' to express possibility. Also, 'such a joy' should be 'such joy' because 'joy' is an uncountable noun here. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'you know' as it is an interjection.

× The only musical lessons I have received as a child was piano.

✓ The only musical lessons I received as a child were piano lessons.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have received' with a past time reference 'as a child', which is incorrect. Simple past 'received' is appropriate. Also, 'lessons' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Adding 'lessons' after 'piano' clarifies the meaning.

× For instance, singing a popular songs or traditional tunes could bring everyone closer.

✓ For instance, singing popular songs or traditional tunes could bring everyone closer.

The phrase 'a popular songs' incorrectly combines singular article 'a' with plural noun 'songs'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.