Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng bạn nên chú ý tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'more better' và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng thêm một chút về cảm xúc khi hát để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and boosts my mood. For example, whenever I feel angry or sad, I listen to my favorite songs, which make me feel better and happier. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions freely.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'Yeah, yes' và sử dụng thì phù hợp hơn. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn, ví dụ như sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và mô tả chi tiết hơn về kỹ thuật hát bạn đã học.

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was a child, I attended music classes where I learned basic singing techniques, such as breathing control and pitch accuracy.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng số nhiều hoặc số ít đúng cách, ví dụ 'family' thay vì 'families' khi nói về gia đình mình. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý, tránh lặp từ như 'my families' và 'my family people'.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and friends because they always support me. In the future, I also hope to perform in front of an audience to share my passion for singing.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'can be reduce'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, đồng thời mở rộng thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and negative emotions. For instance, after a long day, singing my favorite songs makes me feel more relaxed and cheerful.

× I will listen to my favorite song which makes me feel more better and happier.

✓ I will listen to my favorite song which makes me feel better and happier.

The phrase 'more better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative form of 'good'. Using 'more' before 'better' is redundant and grammatically wrong. The correct form is simply 'better'.

× I have learned how to sing.

✓ I have learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are acceptable past participle forms of 'learn'. However, in British English, 'learnt' is more commonly used, which fits better with the context of the conversation. This correction aligns with the likely intended usage.

× I know how to sing like a basic technique.

✓ I know how to sing basic techniques.

The phrase 'like a basic technique' is incorrect because 'like' is used improperly here. The sentence should express that the student knows basic singing techniques. Also, 'technique' should be plural to match the context. Therefore, 'I know how to sing basic techniques' is correct.

× I would like to sing for my families, my friends or my family people, but in the future I also like to sing in front of audience.

✓ I would like to sing for my family, my friends, or my relatives, but in the future I also want to sing in front of an audience.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. 'Family people' is unnatural; 'relatives' is a better choice. Also, 'audience' is a singular collective noun and requires an article 'an'. Additionally, 'like to sing' in the future context is better expressed as 'want to sing'.

× For me, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you feel sad or angry. Singing can be reduce stress and negative feelings after a long day.

✓ For me, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you feel sad or angry, singing can reduce stress and negative feelings after a long day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains an incorrect verb form 'can be reduce'. The sentence should be combined properly with a comma after 'angry' and the verb phrase corrected to 'can reduce'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.