Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unclear phrases and minor grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and natural, for example, replace "a set of societies" with "a sense of community". Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I participated in many competitions as a child and won several prizes. Moreover, singing has helped me feel connected to a community of music lovers.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions, such as "simulate her seeing skills" which seems incorrect. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide a clear explanation. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I learned to sing from my mother, who is an orchestra player. When I was young, I enjoyed imitating her singing techniques to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains awkward phrasing like "support me at my back" and "thank for them to thank." Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I would like to sing for my parents because they have always supported me, both emotionally and financially. Singing for them would be my way of expressing gratitude.

제안: There are some errors such as "seeing" instead of "singing" and awkward phrases like "leave them off the steam." Use correct vocabulary and clearer expressions. Also, try to add linking words and specific examples to support your answer.

예시: Absolutely, I believe singing helps people to relieve stress and enjoy different rhythms and styles of music, such as rock or pop, which can bring happiness.