Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议使用完整且连贯的句子，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was a child, I often sang songs using an app called Qian Ming Chang, which made singing more fun and interactive.

제안: 回答简短且不够具体，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持观点，避免模糊表达。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually sing casually for fun and enjoy the freedom it gives me to express myself.

제안: 回答不连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答问题，然后用连贯的句子解释原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I would like to sing for my best friends and family members because sharing interesting experiences strengthens our relationships. Singing together is also a relaxing activity that brings us closer.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并用具体原因支持观点。

예시: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people. When someone feels upset, singing or listening to music can help them feel calm and improve their mood.

× When I was a child I usually sing in an app named Qian Ming Chang.

✓ When I was a child, I usually sang in an app named Qian Ming Chang.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态。这里的'sing'应改为'sang'。

× I think Sing a songs.

✓ I think singing songs.

'Sing a songs'中'a'与复数名词'songs'搭配错误，应去掉'a'并使用动名词形式'singing'。

× Sing songs is very interesting.

✓ Singing songs is very interesting.

主语应为动名词形式'singing'，而非动词原形'sing'。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learnt how to sing.

'learned'和'learnt'均为过去分词，英式英语中更常用'learnt'，根据语境可选择。此处可接受，但若坚持美式英语则无误。

× I just sing it randomly. And freedom itself.

✓ I just sing it randomly and freely.

原句断句不完整，'And freedom itself'不构成完整句子，应合并并用副词形式修饰动词。

× Maybe my best friend and family members I think sharing some in sharing some interesting things is important to relationship and sing a song is a relax relaxing thing in.

✓ Maybe my best friend and family members. I think sharing some interesting things is important to relationships, and singing a song is a relaxing thing.

句子结构混乱，缺少标点，'sharing some in sharing some'重复且错误，'relationship'应为复数'relationships'，'sing a song is a relax relaxing thing in'中'relax'应为形容词'relaxing'，且'in'多余。

× Definitely when someone feel upset and they will sing they will listen to some music because listening to music can make them feel happy and and calm down them and they will feel.

✓ Definitely, when someone feels upset, they will sing or listen to some music because listening to music can make them feel happy and calm down.

主语'someone'为单数，动词应加's'变为'feels'；句子冗长且重复，'and and calm down them'语序错误，应为'calm down'，且'calm down'后不直接加宾语，应改为'calm down'本身或用被动结构。