Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如"seeing"应为"singing"，且句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，注意单词拼写和语法，避免冗余。

예시: I don't really like singing because I often sing off key and can't hit the right notes. Therefore, I feel a bit self-conscious about my voice and prefer listening to others sing.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如"learn singing skills"应为"singing skills"，"send some simple songs"表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing in middle school. Our teacher taught us some basic singing skills, and we practiced simple songs. I actually learned some useful tips.

제안: 回答表达了感情，但有语法和用词错误，如"she is the word for me"应为"she is the world to me"，句子有些重复。建议注意词汇准确性，避免重复，句子更连贯。

예시: I'd love to sing for my mother because she means the world to me. She has always supported me through ups and downs. In fact, I wrote a song for her and plan to sing it on her next birthday to express my love and gratitude.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如"can brings"应为"can bring"，"people seeing"应为"people listening"，"reduce suggests"应为"reduce stress"。建议注意语法和词汇准确性。

예시: Yes, absolutely. Although I don't know the scientific reasons, I believe singing brings joy not only to those who sing but also to those who listen. It can lighten the mood, reduce stress, and help people connect emotionally.

× Well actually seeing isn't really my thing because I am often off key and I cannot sing the right tone so I feel a little bit self-conscious about my voice.

✓ Well actually singing isn't really my thing because I am often off key and I cannot sing the right tone so I feel a little bit self-conscious about my voice.

这里的错误是将'singing'错误写成'seeing'，属于动词现在分词形式的错误。'Singing'表示唱歌，符合句意；'seeing'表示看，与句意不符。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my middle school and the teacher taught us some basic learn singing skills and we send some simple songs.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my middle school and the teacher taught us some basic singing skills and we sang some simple songs.

这里存在过去时态使用错误。'Have learned'改为'slearned'更符合过去时间点的表达；'learn singing skills'应改为'singing skills'，'send'应改为'sang'，因为描述的是过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my middle school and the teacher taught us some basic learn singing skills and we send some simple songs.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my middle school and the teacher taught us some basic singing skills and we sang some simple songs.

'Learn singing skills'中'learn'应为形容词形式'singing'修饰'skills'，表示'唱歌技巧'。

× I'd love to sing for my mother because she is the word for me.

✓ I'd love to sing for my mother because she is the world for me.

这里单复数错误，'word'应为'world'，表示'世界'，符合句意。

× Yes, absolutely. Although I cannot tell you the scientific reasons behind it, I still believe it can brings joy to people, not only to the people seeing but also to those listen.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Although I cannot tell you the scientific reasons behind it, I still believe it can bring joy to people, not only to the people singing but also to those listening.

'can brings'中动词应为原形'bring'，因为情态动词后接动词原形；'people seeing'应为'people singing'，'those listen'应为'those listening'，动词应使用现在分词形式作定语。

× It can lighten the mood, reduce suggests and even help people connect emotionally.

✓ It can lighten the mood, reduce stress and even help people connect emotionally.

'reduce suggests'中'suggests'用词错误，应为'stress'表示'压力'，符合句意。