Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed during my free time."

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed during my free time.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, "Yes, I have learned singing by listening to famous singers like Neha Kakkar and Jasmine Sandler, who inspire me with their style."

예시: Yes, I have learned singing by listening to famous singers like Neha Kakkar and Jasmine Sandler, who inspire me with their style.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more coherent. Use linking words and correct grammar. For example, "I want to sing for my father because he always supports me in every situation, and singing for him is my way of showing gratitude."

예시: I want to sing for my father because he always supports me in every situation, and singing for him is my way of showing gratitude.

제안: Provide a more developed answer with reasons or examples. Avoid one-word answers. For example, "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others."

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others.

× Yes, I like singing because in my lazy time and free time I sing the song because it is feel me a very calm and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like singing because in my leisure time and free time I sing songs because it makes me feel very calm and comfortable.

The phrase 'in my lazy time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in my leisure time'. Also, 'sing the song' should be 'sing songs' to indicate general activity. The phrase 'it is feel me' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it makes me feel' to properly express the effect of singing.

× To be honest, I ever learn how to sing from some act singers like I like Neha Kakkar and Jasmine Sandler.

✓ To be honest, I have learned how to sing from some famous singers like Neha Kakkar and Jasmine Sandler.

The use of 'ever learn' is incorrect; the present perfect tense 'have learned' is appropriate here to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'act singers' is unclear; 'famous singers' is more appropriate.

× She is a very good singer and I learn from.

✓ She is a very good singer and I learn from her.

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'her' after 'learn from'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× Well, I love my father and I sing a song for my father because he's one of the person.

✓ Well, I love my father and I sing a song for him because he is a very important person to me.

The phrase 'he's one of the person' is incorrect; it should be 'he is a very important person to me' to convey the intended meaning clearly. Also, 'sing a song for my father' can be simplified to 'sing a song for him' to avoid repetition.

× He how to support me anywhere and any situation so that.

✓ He always supports me in any situation and anywhere.

The phrase 'He how to support me' is incorrect; it should be 'He always supports me'. Also, 'so that' is unnecessary and incomplete here, so it is removed for clarity.