Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I enjoy singing with my friends at KTV because it helps me relax and express emotions that I find hard to share in daily life."

예시: I enjoy singing with my friends at KTV because it helps me relax and express emotions that I find hard to share in daily life.

제안: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like "don't want to learn two more." Instead, say "I learned some singing skills from a friend in a choir, but I found it too difficult, so I only learned how to sing the lyrics."

예시: I learned some singing skills from a friend in a choir, but I found it too difficult, so I only learned how to sing the lyrics.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to organise your ideas. For example, "I want to sing for a friend who helped me when I was sick. He took me to the emergency room and cooked for me to help me recover, so I want to show my gratitude by singing for him."

예시: I want to sing for a friend who helped me when I was sick. He took me to the emergency room and cooked for me to help me recover, so I want to show my gratitude by singing for him.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. For example, "Definitely yes. Singing can soothe people's moods, and having a beautiful voice can create memorable moments for others."

예시: Definitely yes. Singing can soothe people's moods, and having a beautiful voice can create memorable moments for others.

× Yes, I used to hang out with my friends to KTV and sings because singing can shake our attention off and we can express the emotion that we are not convenient to express in our daily life.

✓ Yes, I used to hang out with my friends at KTV and sing because singing can take our attention off and we can express the emotions that we are not comfortable expressing in our daily life.

The phrase 'hang out with my friends to KTV' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for locations like KTV. 'Sings' should be 'sing' because the subject 'I' requires the base form after 'used to'. 'Shake our attention off' is better expressed as 'take our attention off'. 'The emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. 'Not convenient to express' is incorrect; 'not comfortable expressing' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I used to hang out with my friends to KTV and sings because singing can shake our attention off and we can express the emotion that we are not convenient to express in our daily life.

✓ Yes, I used to hang out with my friends at KTV and sing because singing can take our attention off and we can express the emotions that we are not comfortable expressing in our daily life.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect when referring to a place where you hang out; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× Yes, I have learned the singing skills from my friends who is belongs to a choir.

✓ Yes, I have learned singing skills from my friends who belong to a choir.

The relative clause refers to 'friends' which is plural, so the verb should be 'belong' not 'is belongs'. Also, 'the singing skills' should be 'singing skills' without 'the'.

× However, it's too complex for me so I don't want to learn two more.

✓ However, it's too complex for me so I don't want to learn any more.

The phrase 'two more' is unclear and incorrect in this context; 'any more' is the correct quantifier to indicate additional learning.

× I just learned how to sing the lyrics only.

✓ I just learned how to sing the lyrics only.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× I want to sing for a friend because when I was sick he bring me to the emergency and the first time and also he cook for me to energize my my to energize me.

✓ I want to sing for a friend because when I was sick he brought me to the emergency room for the first time and also he cooked for me to energize me.

The verbs 'bring' and 'cook' should be in past tense 'brought' and 'cooked' to match the past event. 'The emergency' should be 'the emergency room'. The phrase 'and the first time' is misplaced and corrected to 'for the first time'. The repeated phrase 'my my to energize me' is corrected to 'to energize me'.

× I want to sing for a friend because when I was sick he bring me to the emergency and the first time and also he cook for me to energize my my to energize me.

✓ I want to sing for a friend because when I was sick he brought me to the emergency room for the first time and also he cooked for me to energize me.

The phrase 'to the emergency' is incomplete; it should be 'to the emergency room' to specify the place.

× I want to sing for a friend because when I was sick he bring me to the emergency and the first time and also he cook for me to energize my my to energize me.

✓ I want to sing for a friend because when I was sick he brought me to the emergency room for the first time and also he cooked for me to energize me.

The repeated phrase 'my my to energize me' is incorrect and redundant; it should be simplified to 'to energize me'.

× Definitely yes, because singing can soothe people's mood and if you think pretty well when you have a beautiful voice, it can make a memorable memory to the others.

✓ Definitely yes, because singing can soothe people's moods and if you think positively when you have a beautiful voice, it can create memorable memories for others.

'People's mood' should be plural 'moods' as it refers to multiple people. 'Think pretty well' is incorrect; 'think positively' is appropriate. 'Make a memorable memory to the others' is awkward; 'create memorable memories for others' is better.

× Yes, if you thinks beautiful.

✓ Yes, if you think beautifully.

'Thinks' is incorrect for the subject 'you'; it should be 'think'. Also, 'beautiful' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'beautifully' is needed to modify the verb 'think'.