Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt cảm xúc một cách mạch lạc và chính xác hơn.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed, especially when I sing my favorite songs.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons, but I practice singing alone at home by listening to songs on apps like Spotify or MEP.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sắp xếp câu hợp lý, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt cảm xúc của mình.

예시: I would like to sing with Shentong MTV because I really admire him; he is very talented and charming.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel free.

× Yes, I like singing because I feel as if when I singing and I very happy to sing a favorite favorite song.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I feel as if I am singing and I am very happy to sing a favorite song.

The phrase 'when I singing' is incorrect because the verb 'singing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'I very happy' lacks the verb 'am' to be grammatically correct. The correct form is 'I am very happy'. Additionally, the repetition of 'favorite' is unnecessary.

× No I haven't. I learn alone in my house and listen to my phone through our Spotify app or MEP app.

✓ No, I haven't. I learn alone in my house and listen to my phone through the Spotify app or MEP app.

The sentence 'I learn alone in my house' is in the present tense, which is acceptable if the student means they currently learn alone. However, since the question is about past experience, it would be better to use past tense 'I learned alone'. Also, 'our Spotify app' is incorrect because Spotify is a general app, so 'the Spotify app' is more appropriate.

× I want to sing with the Shentong MTV because I very crazy about I am crazy about him and I want to sing with him because he's very lovely and so appealing. Yes, I I think.

✓ I want to sing with Shentong MTV because I am very crazy about him and I want to sing with him because he's very lovely and so appealing. Yes, I think so.

The phrase 'I very crazy about I am crazy about him' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'I am very crazy about him'. Also, 'the Shentong MTV' is incorrect; proper nouns like names usually do not take 'the'. The phrase 'Yes, I I think' is incomplete and should be 'Yes, I think so'.

× I want to sing with the Shentong MTV because I very crazy about I am crazy about him and I want to sing with him because he's very lovely and so appealing. Yes, I I think.

✓ I want to sing with Shentong MTV because I am very crazy about him and I want to sing with him because he's very lovely and so appealing. Yes, I think so.

The use of 'the' before 'Shentong MTV' is incorrect because proper names of people or groups generally do not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I think yeah, I think yes, because a singing can give many people in a personal small scale and people can freedom can have a freedom in.

✓ I think, yes, because singing can bring happiness to many people on a personal small scale and people can have freedom.

The phrase 'a singing' is incorrect; 'singing' as a general activity does not need an article. 'Can give many people in a personal small scale' is awkward; it should be 'bring happiness to many people on a personal small scale'. The phrase 'people can freedom can have a freedom in' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'people can have freedom'.