Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“like it singing”应为“like singing”，并且句子结构不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意时态和句子结构的正确性。

예시: Yes, I like singing, especially when I take a shower. It helps me relax and relieve the stress from my daily life.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容重复。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并提供具体细节。

예시: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I sometimes watch movies and try to imitate the singers to practice.

제안: 回答较为自然，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。建议适当扩展理由，表达更具体。

예시: I prefer to sing alone because I am a bit shy. Singing to myself helps me feel comfortable and relaxed without worrying about others.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清晰地表达观点，并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When people feel sad, singing together can lift their spirits and create a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, I like it singing, especially when I was taking a shower.

✓ Yes, I like singing, especially when I was taking a shower.

动词like后面直接跟动名词形式singing，而不是it singing。这里的错误是多余的it，正确用法是like + 动名词。

× When I sit in I feel it's really relaxing and I can get rid of all my pressure in my daily life.

✓ When I sit in, I feel it's really relaxing and I can get rid of all my pressure in my daily life.

句子中缺少逗号，导致结构不清晰。加上逗号后，句子结构更完整，表达更清楚。

× I didn't really go to find a teacher and teach me how to sing, but I haven't opened a movie and tried to practice how to sing like a real singer.

✓ I didn't really go to find a teacher to teach me how to sing, but I have watched a movie and tried to practice how to sing like a real singer.

1. 动词不定式to teach缺失，导致句子不完整。2. 现在完成时用法错误，应该用have watched而不是haven't opened a movie。3. open movie不合适，应该用watch movie。

× I don't want to sing with any other people.

✓ I don't want to sing with other people.

any other people在否定句中不合适，通常用other people即可，any在这里多余。

× I just want to sing to myself because I'm a little bit shy, so I don't really want to sing to other people.

✓ I just want to sing to myself because I'm a little bit shy, so I don't really want to sing for other people.

动词sing后面搭配介词通常用sing for表示为某人唱歌，sing to表示对某人唱歌，表达意图时用for更合适。

× Yes, I think certainly can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing certainly can bring happiness to people.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。加上主语singing后，句子完整且通顺。

× When people feel sad, we can gather around and signing when you feel happy and when signing to cheer what's going on.

✓ When people feel sad, we can gather around and sing; when you feel happy, you can sing to cheer what's going on.

动词并列时应使用原形动词sing，而不是动名词signing。且句子结构混乱，需分句表达。