Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I am particularly enjoy”应为“I particularly enjoy”，且句子未完整结束。建议注意语法准确性，避免句子不完整，同时回答应更自然流畅。

예시: I particularly enjoy singing because it helps me relax. However, since I am introverted, I prefer singing quietly at home rather than performing in front of others.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“have practice”应为“have practiced”，且部分表达略显简单。建议注意时态一致性，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have practiced singing before. When I was in elementary school, we had regular music lessons where the teacher taught us proper vocal techniques. These classes not only improved my singing skills but also boosted my confidence.

제안: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误，如“make me feel”应为“makes me feel”，建议注意主谓一致。同时可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

예시: I want to sing for my sister at her birthday party because she always makes me feel happy and relaxed at home. Singing for her is a way to show my appreciation and celebrate this special day together. Moreover, I believe it will cheer her up and make the party more enjoyable.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且部分句子首字母大小写错误。建议注意拼写和语法，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I attend a birthday party, I always sing a birthday song to my friend to express my appreciation and make them feel special. Singing together creates a joyful atmosphere and helps everyone feel closer.

× I am particularly enjoy singing because I am a rather introverted person and performing in front of a large audience makes me feel extremely uneasy.

✓ I particularly enjoy singing because I am a rather introverted person and performing in front of a large audience makes me feel extremely uneasy.

句子中“I am particularly enjoy”中“am”与“enjoy”搭配错误，正确用法是“I enjoy”，因为“enjoy”是动词，主语是“I”，不需要“am”。这是现在时态错误。

× However, sometimes I like to sing quietly at home when I.

✓ However, sometimes I like to sing quietly at home.

句子末尾“when I”不完整，缺少谓语或后续内容，导致句子结构错误。应删除不完整部分，使句子完整。

× Yes, I have practice singing before.

✓ Yes, I have practiced singing before.

句子中“have practice”应为现在完成时，动词“practice”需用过去分词形式“practiced”。这是过去分词形式错误。

× When I was in elementary school, we had a regular music lesson where the teacher told us proper vocal techniques.

✓ When I was in elementary school, we had regular music lessons where the teacher taught us proper vocal techniques.

“lesson”应为复数“lessons”，因为是多次课程；“told us”改为“taught us”更符合教学语境。

× I really enjoyed those classes because they not only helped me improve my singing skills but also boost my confidence.

✓ I really enjoyed those classes because they not only helped me improve my singing skills but also boosted my confidence.

句子中“helped”是过去时，后面“boost”应与之时态一致，改为过去式“boosted”。

× I want to sing for my sister at her birthday party because she always make me feel happy and relax at home.

✓ I want to sing for my sister at her birthday party because she always makes me feel happy and relaxed at home.

主语“she”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“make”应加-s变为“makes”；“relax”应为形容词“relaxed”修饰“me”。

× Singing for her is a way to show my appreciation and celebrate this special day together.

✓ Singing for her is a way to show my appreciation and to celebrate this special day together.

“show”与“celebrate”应保持并列结构，建议在“celebrate”前加“to”使结构平行。

× I think it will also cheer her up and make the party more enjoyable.

✓ I think it will also cheer her up and make the party more enjoyable.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，原词为动名词拼写错误，导致句意不明。

× For example, when I join a birthday party, I always sing a birthday song to my friend to express my appreciation and make them feel special.

✓ For example, when I join a birthday party, I always sing a birthday song to my friends to express my appreciation and make them feel special.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为后文用“them”指代复数。

× Singing together creates A joyful atmosphere and help everyone feel closer.

✓ Singing together creates a joyful atmosphere and helps everyone feel closer.

“A”应为小写“a”；“help”应与主语“creates”保持一致，改为“helps”。