Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt mục đích của bạn một cách rõ ràng và logic.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax after a busy day.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc học hát của bạn.

예시: Yes, I have taken singing lessons before, but my parents think they are quite expensive, so I don't take them regularly.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói về từ vựng của mình. Hãy tập trung vào người bạn muốn hát cho và lý do cụ thể, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết hợp lý.

예시: I want to sing for my parents because they always support and encourage me, which motivates me to improve.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their feelings after a stressful day.

× Well, sometimes I have learned to singing, but it's worth a lot of money of my parents.

✓ Well, sometimes I have learned to sing, but it costs a lot of money for my parents.

The verb 'learned' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to sing', not the gerund 'to singing'. Also, 'worth a lot of money of my parents' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'costs a lot of money for my parents'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So they don't they don't like to they don't like to want.

✓ So they don't like it.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. The correct pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to the action or situation, and the sentence should be concise to convey the meaning properly.

× I want to become a former single and find a lot of money to buy anything I want.

✓ I want to become a famous singer and earn a lot of money to buy anything I want.

The word 'former single' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'famous singer'. Also, 'find a lot of money' is better expressed as 'earn a lot of money' to indicate income. This correction addresses vocabulary and singular/plural usage.

× Well, sometimes I have learned to singing, but it's worth a lot of money of my parents.

✓ Well, sometimes I have learned to sing, but it costs a lot of money for my parents.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate who bears the cost. This correction improves the sentence's prepositional accuracy.

× Actually my vocab is very bad, so I want to see my parents because they usually support and encourage me to sing.

✓ Actually, my vocabulary is very poor, so I want to see my parents because they usually support and encourage me to sing.

The word 'vocab' is informal; 'vocabulary' is more appropriate. Also, adding a comma after 'Actually' improves sentence flow. The pronouns are used correctly here, but vocabulary choice is improved.

× Singing has.

✓ Singing has many benefits.

The sentence 'Singing has.' is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'many benefits' completes the sentence and conveys a clear meaning.