Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，建议直接回答喜欢与否，并简要说明原因，避免使用不恰当的词汇如“seeing”。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and brings joy to both myself and others.

제안: 回答较为简单，句子结构重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并具体说明学习唱歌的经历。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing during my primary school years and practiced for almost five years. During that time, I learned many songs and improved my ability to express emotions through singing.

제안: 回答内容较为模糊，表达不够自然。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I want to sing for everyone because music can bring happiness and joy to all listeners.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it makes me feel joyful, and my friends feel the same when they listen to music.

× I don't see because I think seeing can bring happiness to people who send songs or just a way to relax them.

✓ I don't know because I think singing can bring happiness to people who send songs or it's just a way to relax them.

句子结构混乱，'I don't see' 应为 'I don't know'，'seeing' 应为 'singing'，且缺少连接词使句子不通顺。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的词汇和连接词。

× I learned how to sing during my primary school years.

✓ I learned how to sing during my primary school years.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× I learned singing for almost 5 years.

✓ I learned to sing for almost 5 years.

动词 'learn' 后应接不定式 'to do'，而非动名词形式。建议使用 'learn to sing'。

× I learned many songs and I can express them through the past few years.

✓ I learned many songs and have been able to express them over the past few years.

时态和句子结构不当，'can express them through the past few years' 不合逻辑，应使用现在完成时表示持续的能力。

× Everybody, I think everyone has the ability to listen to me, to listen to what I sing or just some music can bring their happiness, joy and so on.

✓ Everybody. I think everyone has the ability to listen to me, to listen to what I sing, or just enjoy some music that can bring them happiness, joy, and so on.

句子缺少标点，且 'some music can bring their happiness' 中 'their' 指代不明，应改为 'them'，使代词指向明确。

× I briefly think so because when I began to sing I am happy and I asked to some of my friends, they also think so.

✓ I briefly think so because when I begin to sing I am happy, and I asked some of my friends; they also think so.

时态混用，'began' 应与 'am' 时态一致，建议统一为一般现在时；'asked to some friends' 中 'to' 多余，应去掉。

× So in my point of view, they can bring happiness to people, not the people the same, not the people they listen.

✓ So in my point of view, singing can bring happiness to people, but not everyone feels the same or enjoys the same songs.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议重组句子，使意思明确，符合英语表达习惯。