Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and clear, but try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I feel like it's so fun' and 'It's a really nice activity', you can combine these ideas to make your answer more effective.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it motivates me when I watch TikTok videos. Moreover, it's a fun and relaxing activity to do at home when I'm bored.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid filler words like 'What what?'. Use linking words to explain your point logically.

예시: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I practice alone at home by singing karaoke videos. Although it's not professional training, it helps me improve my skills.

제안: Your answer shows your personal feelings, which is good, but it lacks clarity and contains some awkward phrases. Try to organize your ideas with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, avoid informal or unclear expressions like 'voice record thing' and 'you don't have'.

예시: I usually sing for myself because I enjoy listening to my recordings later. For example, I record my singing using karaoke videos on YouTube and play them back when I'm bored.

제안: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and informal. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating similar phrases. Use linking words to make your explanation coherent and concise.

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness depending on the type of song. For instance, cheerful songs like those by Katy Perry can uplift your mood, while sad songs might have the opposite effect.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learn' in American English uses the past participle 'learned' rather than 'learnt'. Using 'learned' is more standard in this context for past tense or present perfect tense.

× I never like learn how to sing or someone try to learn me.

✓ I never liked learning how to sing or had someone try to teach me.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'like learn' and 'try to learn me'. The correct past tense form is 'liked learning' and 'try to learn me' should be 'try to teach me' because 'learn' is for the learner and 'teach' is for the instructor. Also, 'learn me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'teach me'.

× What what?

✓ What?

The repetition 'What what?' is unnecessary and incorrect in formal speech. Simply using 'What?' is appropriate for asking for clarification.

× I open my voice messages, voice record thing and I open karaoke on YouTube and it starts singing for myself.

✓ I open my voice messages, voice recording app, and I open karaoke on YouTube and sing for myself.

The phrase 'voice record thing' is informal and unclear; 'voice recording app' is clearer. Also, 'it starts singing for myself' is incorrect because 'it' (karaoke) does not sing; the subject should be 'I'. 'Myself' is a reflexive pronoun and should be used correctly; here, 'for myself' is acceptable but the sentence structure needs correction.

× So later when I grow up or something or whenever I'm bored, I'll listen to my amazing talents that you don't have.

✓ So later when I grow up or whenever I'm bored, I'll listen to my amazing talents that you don't have.

The phrase 'or something' is informal and unnecessary here. Removing it improves clarity. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× So it depends on what kind of song you're putting.

✓ So it depends on what kind of song you're playing.

The verb 'putting' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'playing' when referring to music or songs. 'Putting' is not used with 'song' in this way.