Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but try to make it more natural and clear. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "I enjoy singing because it boosts my confidence and lifts my spirits. I especially like singing during karaoke sessions with my friends, and sometimes when I'm alone in the bathroom, which makes me feel happier."

예시: I enjoy singing because it boosts my confidence and lifts my spirits. For instance, I love singing during karaoke sessions with my friends, and sometimes I sing alone in the bathroom, which always makes me feel happier.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and incomplete sentences. For example, you can say: "Yes, I took singing lessons when I was in nursing school. We joined the school choir and practiced singing for our matriculation ceremony."

예시: Yes, I took singing lessons when I was in nursing school. We joined the school choir and practiced singing for our matriculation ceremony.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, you can say: "I enjoy singing for my family because they always encourage and support me. When I sing at home, it lifts my children's spirits and brightens the atmosphere. This motivates me to improve my singing skills."

예시: I enjoy singing for my family because they always encourage and support me. When I sing at home, it lifts my children's spirits and brightens the atmosphere. This motivates me to improve my singing skills.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say: "Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. When people sing together, like during karaoke sessions, it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps reduce stress."

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. When people sing together, like during karaoke sessions, it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps reduce stress.

× It's especially when I'm participating with my friends during karaoke session and then when I'm in the bathroom too.

✓ It's especially when I'm participating with my friends during karaoke sessions and then when I'm in the bathroom too.

The word 'session' should be plural 'sessions' because it refers to multiple occasions of karaoke, which is more natural in this context.

× When I'm in the bathroom singing a few kind of very I feel happier.

✓ When I'm in the bathroom singing a few kinds of songs, I feel happier.

The phrase 'a few kind of very' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'a few kinds of songs' to correctly express multiple types of songs, and the sentence is completed properly.

× Yes, I have engaged in singing lessons during the time of my youth that should be when I was in School of Nursing.

✓ Yes, I engaged in singing lessons during my youth, which was when I was in the School of Nursing.

The present perfect 'have engaged' is less appropriate here than simple past 'engaged' because the action happened at a specific time in the past. Also, the sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× We are preparing for matriculation.

✓ We were preparing for matriculation.

The tense should be past 'were preparing' to match the past context of the sentence.

× I enjoy singing for my family because they always encourage and support me.

✓ I enjoy singing for my family because they always encourage and support me.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× For example, when I sing at home, it helps my children spirits.

✓ For example, when I sing at home, it helps my children's spirits.

The possessive form 'children's' is needed to correctly show that the spirits belong to the children.

× It leaves my children's spirits and brightens the atmosphere.

✓ It lifts my children's spirits and brightens the atmosphere.

The verb 'leaves' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lifts' to express improving spirits.

× Singing for them motivates me to improve my singing skills and become a better singer.

✓ Singing for them motivates me to improve my singing skills and become a better singer.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Singing brings happiness to people, especially when you are having fun with people in Caracas section, you see that from everybody's having is that happiness will be there, the atmosphere will be brightened and there will be no kind of stress in the midst of people who are in character section.

✓ Singing brings happiness to people, especially when you are having fun with people in karaoke sessions; you see that everyone is happy, the atmosphere is brightened, and there is no stress among the people in the karaoke session.

The phrase 'Caracas section' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'karaoke session'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.