Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. I often sing with my friends and family, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and sentence structures. Also, link your ideas smoothly for better coherence.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was younger and have always enjoyed it. During school, I practiced regularly, and I still sing as a hobby today.

제안: Your answer is unclear due to incorrect word choices and grammar. Focus on expressing your ideas clearly with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I want to sing for my family because they always support me, especially during family functions. Singing for them helps entertain everyone and creates a joyful atmosphere.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. When they sing at parties or functions, they feel relaxed and stress-free. Many people enjoy singing because it helps them express their emotions.

× I often singing with my friends and family members.

✓ I often sing with my friends and family members.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'often'. After adverbs of frequency like 'often', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Hence, 'sing' is correct here.

× During my school I was practiced regularly and still enjoy singing as a hobby.

✓ During my school days, I practiced regularly and still enjoy singing as a hobby.

The phrase 'was practiced' is incorrect because 'practice' is an active verb here, so the subject should be the doer. Also, 'During my school' is incomplete; it should be 'During my school days'. The verb 'practiced' should be in simple past tense to indicate a past habit.

× I want to sing for my family because they are always spotted to me, mostly at family functions too.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they are always supportive of me, mostly at family functions too.

The phrase 'spotted to me' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The correct phrase is 'supportive of me' to express that the family encourages the speaker.

× In entertain everyone and make the atmosphere it joyful.

✓ I want to entertain everyone and make the atmosphere joyful.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect structure. Adding 'I want to' clarifies the subject and verb. Also, 'make the atmosphere it joyful' is incorrect; 'make the atmosphere joyful' is correct.

× When individuals are singing they feel stress free and relax in any parties or function.

✓ When individuals sing, they feel stress-free and relaxed at any party or function.

The present continuous 'are singing' is less appropriate here; simple present 'sing' is better for general statements. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' to match the adjective form. Also, 'parties or function' should be singular or plural consistently; 'party or function' is better.

× People are preferred to singing because it's express emotions.

✓ People prefer singing because it expresses emotions.

'Are preferred to singing' is incorrect; the active form 'prefer singing' is correct. Also, 'it's express emotions' should be 'it expresses emotions' to match subject-verb agreement.