Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more coherent and complete by linking your ideas smoothly. Avoid short, fragmented sentences and be more specific about why singing helps you relieve stress. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes like 'a music' to 'music'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing even though I'm not very good at it. I often sing or listen to music while taking a shower or doing household chores because it helps me relax and relieve stress.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'you know' and 'yeah'. Use clear and concise sentences. Also, use correct verb forms such as 'learned' instead of 'learn'.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I usually just listen to music and sing along for fun.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts. Also, check for grammar and vocabulary accuracy, for example, 'things' should be 'thing' and clarify 'feel like ball'.

예시: I don't usually sing for anyone in particular because singing is not really my hobby. I mainly sing to relax, especially when I'm in the shower or feeling stressed.

제안: Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific in your explanation.

예시: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring joy and happiness. It can unite people worldwide because even if we don't understand the language, we can still enjoy the harmony and emotions in the music.

× Yeah, I usually sing a song or listen to a music when I shower.

✓ Yeah, I usually sing a song or listen to music when I shower.

The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. Using 'a music' is incorrect. The correct form is simply 'listen to music'. This is a common mistake when treating uncountable nouns as countable.

× Doing household chores.

✓ I do household chores.

The original sentence fragment 'Doing household chores.' lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. To form a complete sentence, a subject 'I' and a verb 'do' are needed. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Not really. Honestly, I never, I have never learned how to sing before.

✓ Not really. Honestly, I have never learned how to sing before.

The phrase 'I never, I have never' is redundant and awkward. The correct form is 'I have never learned', which uses the present perfect tense to indicate an experience up to now. Removing the extra 'I never' improves grammatical correctness and fluency.

× I never learn singing before.

✓ I have never learned singing before.

The sentence uses simple present tense 'learn' incorrectly to refer to a past experience. The correct tense is present perfect 'have never learned' to express that up to now, the person has not learned singing. Also, 'learned' is the past participle form needed here.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is from the examiner and is grammatically correct. No correction needed.

× It's just a things that I can, you know, relax when singing, especially when I shower, when I feel like ball, then I just.

✓ It's just a thing that I can, you know, relax when singing, especially when I shower, when I feel like bawling, then I just.

The phrase 'a things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be singular 'a thing'. Also, 'feel like ball' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo; likely intended 'feel like bawling' (crying). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, is definitely singing can bring joy, happiness and can bring people all around the world together.

✓ Yes, singing can definitely bring joy, happiness and bring people all around the world together.

The original sentence has an incorrect structure with 'is definitely singing can'. The modal verb 'can' should directly follow the subject 'singing'. Also, 'definitely' is better placed after the modal verb for natural flow. Removing 'is' and repositioning 'definitely' corrects the modal verb usage.

× You know, sometime we can we just hear this music is in the language that we don't even understand, but we can enjoy the harmony from them.

✓ You know, sometimes we can just hear music in a language that we don't even understand, but we can enjoy the harmony from it.

The sentence has several issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency), 'we can we just hear' is redundant and incorrect, 'this music is in the language' should be 'music in a language', and 'harmony from them' is incorrect because 'music' is singular and uncountable, so 'it' should be used. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.