Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复，且句子较长，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to relax and express my emotions. I often sing my favorite songs when I have free time, which makes me feel happy and refreshed.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，并且使回答更连贯。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn by listening to my favorite singers and practicing their songs on my own.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，建议注意主谓一致，避免重复词汇，并使句子更简洁自然。

예시: Unlike some friends who enjoy singing on stage, I prefer to sing for my family, friends, or people I care about because singing feels like a personal experience to me.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，重复较多，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并举出具体例子使内容更丰富。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. For instance, people sing 'Happy Birthday' to celebrate someone's special day, and during Christmas, songs like 'Jingle Bells' create a joyful atmosphere.

× I love listening music and I think on my own to sing these songs are very interesting and also singing is a really effective way to to have relaxation in my spare time.

✓ I love listening to music and I think singing these songs on my own is very interesting, and also singing is a really effective way to have relaxation in my spare time.

动词listen后面需要加介词to，构成固定搭配listen to。句中缺少to导致表达不完整。

× I just listening to those singers and sing the songs that I loved loved on my own.

✓ I just listen to those singers and sing the songs that I loved on my own.

动词listen应使用原形或第三人称单数形式，这里主语是I，应使用原形listen。

× Some of my friends love sing, love singing on stages, but for me I just want to sing for my friends, my family or the people that I like because I think singing is actually a a personal things.

✓ Some of my friends love singing on stages, but for me I just want to sing for my friends, my family or the people that I like because I think singing is actually a personal thing.

things是复数形式，但前面有不定冠词a，a后面应接单数名词，故things应改为thing。

× Some of my friends love sing, love singing on stages, but for me I just want to sing for my friends, my family or the people that I like because I think singing is actually a a personal things.

✓ Some of my friends love singing on stages, but for me I just want to sing for my friends, my family or the people that I like because I think singing is actually a personal thing.

love后面接动词时应使用动名词形式singing，而不是动词原形sing。

× we learn, we listening to the Jingle Bells.

✓ we learn, we listen to the Jingle Bells.

动词listen应使用原形或第三人称单数形式，这里主语是we，应使用原形listen。

× we saw we we saw happy birthday to you when someone is on his birthday and when it is Christmas, we learn, we listening to the Jingle Bells.

✓ we sing Happy Birthday to you when someone is on his birthday and when it is Christmas, we learn, we listen to the Jingle Bells.

这里表达唱歌，应使用动词sing而非saw（看见）。另外，listen后应使用原形listen。